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HVNsnt82086
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since 2001-06-05
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0 posted 2001-11-04 08:44 PM


I look at you each day and know
that you and I could never be
But I'll think of you always
and love you in a way that you can't see.
And when I think of your smile
I know its all worth while
'Cause im my mind you hold me close
and your lips softly brush my cheek...

Why can't it be like that?
Where you hold me in your arms
and never let me go...
Why can't it be like that?
'Cause when I open my eyes
I'm forced to realize
that I'm alone...

I see you turn to me in my mind
and whisper, "I'll never leave so, Baby, please don't cry."
And the thought almost makes me believe it's real,
though I know it's something that you could never feel,
and I can't help wondering why...

Why can't it be like that?
Where you hold me in your arms
and never let me go...
Why can't it be like that?
'Cause when I open my eyes
I'm forced to realize
that I'm alone...

"So when you feel like hope is gone, look inside you and be strong, and you'll finally see the truth...that a hero lies in you." *~Mariah Carey- Hero~

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Le Capitan de L'Amour
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since 2000-07-15
Posts 60

1 posted 2001-11-04 08:48 PM


Well I think that nobody should be lonely.I hope that you can be strong and cope with energy to live on in this life of sadness.

Sincerely Christian

TopGunLauren
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since 2000-08-02
Posts 718
California
2 posted 2001-11-04 08:53 PM


Everyone at some point feels lonely I know I have many times.But one day that feeling will go away and I hope everything gets better for you soon.
  Lauren

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3 posted 2001-11-04 10:02 PM


Why can't it be like that?
Where you hold me in your arms
and never let me go...
Why can't it be like that?
'Cause when I open my eyes
I'm forced to realize
that I'm alone...

Wow. Well done on this one! I'm sorry that you ARE feeling this way... sucks, don't it? I can't answer your question (why can't it be like that?), but I can tell you that you DON'T need a guy to make you feel not lonely... believe me I know a million times over. If you need to talk my email is
spacebear_15@hotmail.com

~I am a computer genius... Hey! How do you turn this thing on?!?

~Love me because I am Rhonda

DancinQueen
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4 posted 2001-11-05 01:07 AM


im feelin this one. sucks...life goes on, and you'll go on with it one of these days  

**You can't always trust the people you want to**

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5 posted 2001-11-05 01:43 PM


This was so sad...sometimes things dont work out the way we want it to...i hope things do work out in your favor eventually..if you guys were meant to be it will happen..and i really hope you are because it sounds like u care for this person very much

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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