Failure (what kind of poem is this?)

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Angelwings
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0 posted 2001-10-31 12:28 PM

Failure AGAIN
I can't understand
can I succeed
to want to pass
to want to succeed
I can understand
can't I?
again
FAILURE!

I wrote this the other day after I got my exam back in my psychological statistics class. What is the name of the poem format?

If we're told we're bad, that's the only idea we'll ever have. Maybe if we are surrounded by beauty someday we will become what we see.

Skyfire

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1 posted 2001-10-31 12:36 PM

I think I knew the name at one time, but not now... Good write though!

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Jenn Cirrincione

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2 posted 2001-10-31 08:35 AM

Oh wow... I should prolly know this... but I don't. LOL

But I really like the style! Nice work.

Jenn

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3 posted 2001-10-31 10:07 AM

I definately understand how you feel..i've felt like a failure now more than ever..hang in there hun ::hugs::

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Angelwings
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4 posted 2001-10-31 11:30 AM

Thanks for your kind words. Failure isn't a good feeling, but it's nice to know I'm not alone in feeling it. Good luck to all in future writings.

If we're told we're bad, that's the only idea we'll ever have. Maybe if we are surrounded by beauty someday we will become what we see.

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Member Patricius

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5 posted 2001-10-31 01:06 PM

Sorry that I don't know the format, but it was nice and I liked it. Very creatively done.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

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Angelwings
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6 posted 2001-10-31 10:41 PM

Heck maybe I made it up. I could've sworn it saw it on here as a challenge or something. Well have a good halloween all.

If we're told we're bad, that's the only idea we'll ever have. Maybe if we are surrounded by beauty someday we will become what we see.

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Member Rara Avis

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7 posted 2001-11-02 02:43 PM

I'm not sure either on what format this is
Don't worry about failures, just bounce back up
nice to see you sharing again

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