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Spine Grinder
Senior Member

since 2000-10-28

Posts 1127
Standing In Silence...

0 posted 2001-10-09 08:38 PM

Don't lie to me,
don't show me deceit.
I know we can get through,
these problems, we can defeat.

No I really don't think so,
Now you must go.

My feelings toward you,
are now not the same.
You played my heart,
like love was just a game.

We have to say goodbye,
god, this makes me wanna cry....

Did u ever have the feeling that he meant everything 2 u, yet u meant nothing 2 him?.....~me
~...I can be ur hero baby, I can kiss the pain away...~

Honey
Member

since 2001-10-09

Posts 92
Hot girl From Canada

1 posted 2001-10-10 12:14 PM

I'm am going through the same thing right now, i really liked this poem, keep up the good work and smile

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-10-10 11:27 AM

Sounds like some tough times for you. The piece conveyed these emotions well. Try to be strong in this situation. You'll get through it eventually.

Thanks for sharing and keep smiling.

~AF~

"I remember the days when I was so eager to satisfy you"
Nelly Furtado - On the radio

peachesNcream
Senior Member

since 2001-08-21

Posts 513
Ocean Of Tears

3 posted 2001-10-10 06:41 PM

i the exact feeling staci dont worry and hold ur held up high. dont forget crying helps and if you need to do it go ahead! its better to have ur emotions let out than keep them bottled up. good write! lylas ~Jess~

~*~How can we be friends if everytime I think of you I know that's all we'll ever be~*~

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-10-12 10:26 AM

Dont be afraid to cry..EVER! Just let those tears flow like u've never seen em flow before, it helps so much in the end. I enjoyed this a lot..great job and i hope things get better for you ::Hugs::

Punk Angel
Member

since 2001-07-25

Posts 66
Pennsylvania, US

5 posted 2001-10-12 05:45 PM

awwww!!!! staci!! this is good!!!!! but kinda depressin tho....whos it bout???

We love what is lost, but does what we lost love us back??
~*Krista*~

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

6 posted 2001-10-12 11:14 PM

*Sigh* why are the good ones always so sad? You'll get through it hon, I know you will.

If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

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