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Breaking Down The Wall
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Breaking Down The Wall |
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CwboyAtHeart Senior Member
since 2001-04-14
Posts 541Selah, WA, USA 
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Okay, okay, I'll also contribute to the poems about friends. lol I'm making this as I'm typing it here on the "post" thingy, so it's not an old one... But yeah. Just thought I'd spend some time writing, which I haven't taken much time to do lately.  Let me know what u think!BREAKING DOWN THE WALL Sometimes I feel like We're slowly drifting apart Time is building a dike And it's slowly breaking my heart Today we tore that wall down And we're closer once again I've got no more reason to frown We're friends like we were back then I know that you'll be there If there's a reason I'm feeling bad And I know that you'll forever care You make me happy when I'm sad When I'm sad and when I cry I know you'll brighten my day I might get mad and keep asking why You explain to me that all will be okay Even though we're not All that close of friends I will always still love you a lot And I hope our friendship never ends - Cody - |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Aww Cody- I liked this. I'm so glad things got better between you and your friends. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very well put Cody. Nice to see that things are ship shape.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Great read. You have expressed yourself well. thanks for the share. hi Sweets, Lizzy, Kris, Ina, Erin, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Ashley, Sara, Justine, Leah, Jess, Kimmie, Mare |
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TopGunLauren Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 718California |
Very sweet poem I loved it keep up the awsome work! Lauren |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
i love this!! i have a couple of friends i could send this too... LOL it's so good... you really wrote it well. i like the overall message and the last stanza completes it. nice work "...And i want to take you down, but your soul could not be found, doesn't matter much you see cause your disease is killing me..." -Saliva |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is very sweet, Cody. You're lucky to have such a great friend in your life. I'm glad that you two could reason out the differences. A friendship that's strong enough to withstand an argument like that is obviously strong enough to never break. Nicely done. I enjoyed the read --Marie You can’t expect the roses to grow without the weeds. |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
such an awesome tribute to a friend, and its got a great flow. I'm sure whoever it is will appreciate it deeply. "and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
sweet..great job! im addicted to passions in poetry!...are you? |
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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677 |
This was a wonderful poem! Great job! The title caught my eye, and I am glad it did! *Amanda* |
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stace_co2003 Member
since 2001-03-30
Posts 497In a dream world |
awwwwwwww, how cute!!!!!!!!!!  but this isn't the poem I wanted, haha, I wanted the other one I was supposed to go to ... I suck!!! -->Don't frown. You never know who is falling in love with your smile. |
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