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Jenn Cirrincione

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0 posted 2001-10-22 10:45 AM

Frantic searching,
always seeking.
Happiness forever,
standing unreached.
Cycle continues,
Not knowing why--
Shielded so well,
for oh so long.
Lied to myself...
All of those days,
yes, countless nights.
Striving for,
what's never given.
Easy to blame,
the "heartless creatures"
But too stubborn,
to accept;
It might just be...
~Me~

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

punkrockerrobin

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since 2001-05-15

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1 posted 2001-10-22 03:57 PM

wooohooo great poem jen!
~*~ROBIN~*~

i'm just dumb!! i can't do nuthin right!

anonymous albert ?

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2 posted 2001-10-22 04:32 PM

that hit home for me...i TRULY related to it.

and its how i feel a lot...these days or months as cause of "ME", even though it wasnt meant to.

wondeful job on writing this and letting me know im NOT alone, like this...*sighs*

[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 10-22-2001).]

Jenn Cirrincione

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3 posted 2001-10-22 11:23 PM

Thanks Robin

Aww, Alby, sorry you relate... it's just this jumbled crud I've been feeling and it's annoying. Sometimes you realize that the only one who can change things is *you*. You know? Thanks for your comment.

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 10-22-2001).]

Acies

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since 2000-06-07

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4 posted 2001-11-05 09:48 AM

OOOooooooooohhhhhhh, very good point to bring up
That could be a possibility too
Or th epoem could be used as an analogy of something else
e.g. We are too busy finding other's faults that we don't see our own
AWESOME POEM JENN

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?

xShUgArHiGhx

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tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-11-05 01:37 PM

I really enjoyed this poem jenn...good job

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Local Parasite

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6 posted 2001-11-05 05:07 PM

Nice poem, Jenn Cirrincione. A jumble of thoughts? Mayhaps, but nay not a jumble of talent... very focal, rather. Consistently written and crippling to the spirit. Masterful work. You have a definite talent for projection of emotional feelings.
I'm glad that this got to be my first read.

Jenn Cirrincione

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7 posted 2001-11-05 07:23 PM

Thank you Acire, Shugar, and L.P.
Welcome to PIP L.P.!! And I feel very honored that I was the first you read.

I'm sure you'll love it around here.

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08

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8 posted 2001-11-08 12:26 PM

great poem jenn i enjoyed the read. also i must say i don't know if its you as in the "me" or the other person who brought these feelings to par but which ever best of luck.
we poets need to stick together.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

DawnG

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9 posted 2001-11-08 12:32 PM

Great poem.

Dawn

Jenn Cirrincione

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10 posted 2001-11-08 12:44 PM

Thanks Dawn.

Jeremiah, sheeessh what are you doing you're embarrassing me bringing up all of my stuff...?

lol thank you tho much appreciated.

Jenn

"I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..."

TopGunLauren
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11 posted 2001-11-08 01:13 AM

Very nice poem I loved it keep up the great work.
Lauren

aaron woodside
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12 posted 2001-11-08 01:20 AM

Great write. It's really cool how you are going into the possibility that you are the problem in a relationship. All too often everyone just seems to blame the other person. No one ever thinks they are to blame. Great write. Didn't I say that already.

ex animo,
Aaron

There are no great men, only men in great circumstances.

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