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Finger In My Eye |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
I hide behind a petite satin doll whose security lies between her legs and through the twists of her serpent tongue I hide behind a princess cut from ice My words rush out like winter frost on bare skin A face reflecting an apathetic soul (if only you knew) I hide inside (if only I knew) 10.12.01 There are always answers as long as you're open enough to accept the answers you were not looking for. |
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Domzi Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 288New York (BK) |
Wow...talk about a poem being deep. Keep writing that poetry that makes us think. As my borough has always stated- Do or Die. |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
This was a great read...you should be very proud of this one... ~I haven't memorized all of the cute things to say but I'm working on it~ |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
dark VERY dark, deep as well. i think you expressed this nicely...the somewhat desperate tone within in the poem, was well protaryed...hope all is well with you. "This little light of mine...im gonna let it shine. *sighs* Let it shine...let it shine. Let it shine." |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Incredible ending! Hell- the whole thing was incredible... And for this, you must get a tootsie..*Hands you some candy* LOL Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth... |
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Kicking Kim Member
since 2001-04-16
Posts 426Cloud Cucko Land! |
This was a really meaningfulpoem and you captured a lot of emotion it it!! Great job  ^*~Kicking Kim~*^  "Theres no posession, just obsession and growing depression" |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
Aww.. if you could see me now.. I'd be blushing.  Thanks guys!!!There are always answers as long as you're open enough to accept the answers you were not looking for. |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Normally I don't really like dark, dark, dark poetry, but for some reason I think this one is really good. I just hope everything's all right with you!  If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
I mean, your not the only one who likes cheese you know... but hey... i guess i can compliment this. Behave. |
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fulanodetal3684 Junior Member
since 2001-10-10
Posts 19 |
very nice,short and to the point,deep, I enjoyed it pretty much, thanks for the read! |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
WoW!!! this was great!! If I held a star everytyme |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
jaime...i know now...(((hugs)))....thought provoking words poet....
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
DeEp...DaRk....PerrrrrrFeCt!!! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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