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BlackDove
Junior Member

since 2001-10-14

Posts 18
Why are you reading this???

0 posted 2001-10-18 08:52 PM

Isn't it bitter-sweet?
You're only just getting by
That feeling you get
When you don't know if you've been gone a while

Your soul drops to the tiles

Until you repay the dreams you bought for your lies
You'll be cast away alone on a stormy sky.

The feeling never goes
I hope you know
It stays with you until you die

Can you feel the teardrops slide?

Scrape it over my soul
Then leave me here
I still live in fear...

You'd want more
But what for?

Tomorrow never knows what it doesn't know too soon. -Noel Gallagher

Zukene_Chic
Member

since 2001-09-26

Posts 152
Cali

1 posted 2001-10-18 09:23 PM

Wow. This really reflects what it feels like. I'm glad SOMEBODY can describe the pain... Kudos

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2001-10-18 09:31 PM

Okay, don't hate me, but... what is that about? I'm kinda slow tonight, and it's probably really obvious, and I apologize if it is obvious. Sowwy... Let me know what it's about and I'll be able to reply better, kay?

If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

knightlyshadows
Senior Member

since 2001-04-14

Posts 791
obscured vision

3 posted 2001-10-19 02:47 AM

*hugs* heya ewoksters. been awhile eh?

nice new name hun!
i liked this alot. great job. keep writin. hope all is well. talk to u soon maybe.
tiff

“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

4 posted 2001-10-19 08:41 AM

I completely understand this "state of depression"...its tough and its a long journey...::hugs::

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

Domzi
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 288
New York (BK)

5 posted 2001-10-19 04:12 PM

Not a lot of people can write about being under depression, but you wrote it well.
Loved the poem!

As my borough has always stated- Do or Die.

Dark Enchantress
Senior Member

since 1999-07-27

Posts 1258
meet Morgana

6 posted 2001-10-19 05:45 PM

Can you feel the teardrops slide?

Scrape it over my soul
Then leave me here
I still live in fear...

You'd want more
But what for?

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That was my favorite part, but I liked the whole thing. Being bipolar (manic depression.. whatever they're calling it these days) I entirely understand. I agree with everyone else on this... you describe the emotions extremely well.

There are always answers as long as you're open enough to accept the answers you were not looking for.

jaimespoetry.blogspot.com

never_a_princess
Member

since 2001-06-09

Posts 82
Show Me the Money

7 posted 2001-10-21 07:49 PM

i like this one...just as much as the reprise of it. good poem Ewokz. *said your name* :P anyways! ttyl. *hugz and all that nonsense*
__o0o_Anna_o0o__ *waves*

Friends are angels who lift us to our feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly.

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