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Teen Poetry #5

I Want To Hide

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

0 posted 2001-10-17 10:47 PM

I Want to Hide

I want to hide
  in all the perfect moments
where i was alive
  and laughing
             before i met you
I wish to God I never met you
  someone easier to achieve
Why should i love the sun
  grown into the ground
    I wish you never existed
         to break my dreams
           That's All you've ever done
                                        and more
i want to pretend you weren't there

You'll be replaced, your diamonds will rust
  and another star will shine for this loser.

"and Death i think is no paranthesis"-e.e. cummings

quietlydying

Senior Member

since 2001-06-10

Posts 935
the wonderful land of oz

1 posted 2001-10-17 11:05 PM

i'm really starting to take a liking to your style.

another good read.

thanks.

- jen

so foul and fair a day i have not seen. - macbeth act 1, scene 3

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2001-10-18 04:06 AM

I hope you are ok, this is a very sad poem and I can thourghily sympathise with you... hope things get better and thanks for sharing this great poem

"Ph33r Me I eat N00bies Ph0R bReakFAsT"
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xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-10-18 09:59 AM

Whoa...amazing piece!!! I cant even tell u how much i enjoyed this! I can definately relate to this but i feel ur anger and ur hurt seeping through each word..amazing job!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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