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SunShine913

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since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

0 posted 2001-10-15 01:49 AM

For you, My Beloved,
     are the master of my thoughts...

For you see them in their birth,
     before they reach my lips...

You explain them to me,
     as if I never spoke them,
     or felt them caress my ear...

You put them in frames,
     of brilliant understanding,
     and ornate completion...

You set them in space,
     for all worlds to see,
     and comprehend...

You explain my very soul to me,
     in detail I never knew existed...

Therefore My Beloved,
     I long for my thoughts,
     to be possessed,
     and eternally enslaved,
     by You and no other...

!~Andrea~!
*You only live once, so live it to the
fullest*
*what is love?*
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pharon
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since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

1 posted 2001-10-15 02:41 AM

dang...wow..good

me

Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

2 posted 2001-10-15 10:13 AM

Wow this is absoloutely wonderful, a piece for my libary no less... I just loved your closing Stanza... keep on posting this excellent work

Andrew

"Ph33r Me I eat N00bies Ph0R bReakFAsT"
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Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

3 posted 2001-10-15 10:39 AM

This is amazing
Very sweet, very beautiful sentiments
*applauds*

hi Sweets

, Lizzy

, Jesa

, Ina

, Allysa

, Marie

, Cherish

, Jenn

, Chelsea

, Leah

, Kimmie

, Ashley

, Smurfy

, Alexia

, Kamie

, Kari

, Nan

, Sea

, Zu

, Lml

, Albertia

, Linc

, Jesse

,

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

4 posted 2001-10-15 04:46 PM

wonderful ending lines...overall it was a beautiful protrayal...great job.

=)

samt
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since 2001-08-02

Posts 52
Brisbane

5 posted 2001-10-24 08:06 AM

wow, that was, hmmm, very, .... well its great for starters, obviously from the depths of your heart,...... you sound in love.. sweet

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

6 posted 2001-10-24 05:33 PM

I really like this one! I don't know what else to say about it! Great work!

It takes more work to love myself than to love others... I guess that explains it, eh?

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

7 posted 2001-10-26 01:56 PM

Its weird how some people can bring out things in you that you didnt even kno you had...weird huh??? I liked this poem, i thought it was very true of a lotta people and relationships...

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

anonymousfemale
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

8 posted 2001-10-27 01:35 AM

Nice work Andrea. When reading this and the other piece, it's quite the contrast.
Thanks for sharing and I hope things are well with you.

~AF~

Maybe I'm just a girl...interrupted.

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