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Hallucination
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0 posted 2001-10-14 08:37 AM


" One Last Cry "

Verse 1:
I'm down and waiting for you
trying to get myy feelings through,
but you should know that i am blue
and my love for you is true.
Please wipe these tears from my eyes,
so that I can find another love.

Chorus:
I'm gonna cry
'cause you left me all behind
I can't get you outer my mind.
I'm gonna try
to stop living a lie
I guess I'm down to one last cry.
I know I'm down to one last cry

Verse 2:
I know I have to be strong
lay the past all behind,
'cause life goes on and on and on
untill the end..
So wipe these tears from my eyes,
so that I can get on with my life.

Chorus:
I'm gonna cry
'cause you left me all behind
I can't get you outer my mind.
I'm gonna try
to stop living a lie
I guess I'm down to one last cry.
I know I'm down to one last cry

Bridge:
From the first day I made a lot of mistakes
now I can't even see you face to face,
girl and now you're gone for good
girl girl I could never do you wrong

Chorus:
I'm gonna cry
'cause you left me all behind
I can't get you outer my mind.
I'm gonna try
to stop living a lie
I guess I'm down to one last cry.
Chorus:
I'm gonna cry
'cause you left me all behind
I can't get you outer my mind.
I'm gonna try
to stop living a lie
I guess I'm down to one last cry.

I guess I'm down to one last cry.
I know I'm down to one last cry.
I guess I'm down to one last cry.

http://artists2.iuma.com/IUMA/Bands/Ezt/

© Copyright 2001 Brian Eggertsen - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2001-10-14 09:19 AM


I think this is a great song. A year or so ago I went through something that made me feel like that and this song describes it perfectly. I love it.  

There are always answers as long as you're open enough to accept the answers you were not looking for.

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2 posted 2001-10-14 09:25 AM


~I know I have to be strong
lay the past all behind,
'cause life goes on and on and on
untill the end..
So wipe these tears from my eyes,
so that I can get on with my life.~

Beautiful done, haven't heard the mp3 file yet, but will do  as soon that I have install my winamp.

Charisma

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3 posted 2001-10-18 09:38 PM


What an awesome song! Yeah! Very true to what many people feel a lot of the time...  

If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

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4 posted 2001-10-19 08:49 AM


This was such a beautiful song!!! You write songs so beautifully, i admire your talent   Great job..cant wait to see more!!!

ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd..

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