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Come With Me
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Come With Me |
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Poet Unknown Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 140Missouri |
I can feel you watching me, Stop staring there's nothing to see. Ran out of patience somewhere along the line, Don't ever ever try and test mine. Forgot not who made who, Now there's nothing you can do. Born of darkness and devilish ways, Sit back numbered are your days. Say a little prayer maybe a blessing, Surrounded by fear and over stressing. Deep within the bowels of your soul, You're no different with that empty hole. Rush you in a nightmare, Wake up screaming in dispair. Vision impaired by the fall of night, Creep up behind, strike slip out of sight. Realized ignorance is bliss, Listen for the Satanic hiss. All the while saying "Come with me", Pulled into a world of hate don't you see? Plea for help getting no sympathy, Still you say "Come with me". Living life in the dark, Listening to the shrieks and silent hark. Wipe off that grin, I know where you've been. The aftermath has since forth arrived, All this time that I've survived. Expected the light to take control of me, But then I just wouldn't be. Stings of agony and pain, Nothing to lose everything to prove much to gain. Meet up with you once again to see your fear, Listen close three words you'll hear. Come with me.... Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
This really scares me... *shudder*... *hides* You write well, but I don't like this much...sry... I'm just weak and prissy like that... Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Someone from the darkness said that to me once....he was a great catch.  :The piece is really deep and has so much to be explored throughout. I am determined to get everything out of this. Thanks for the post. "I remember the days when I was so eager to satisfy you" |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Ooohhh... Deep! I like it, I like it! If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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Spice Senior Member
since 2001-04-13
Posts 1266Resting in my cardboard box. |
Awesome Write! Wow! *Blows away* Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth... |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
hmmmm, I'm very intrigued on this one thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
DaNg! Good job on this one!! Great poem!! ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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