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I no longer love you
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I no longer love you |
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~gretchenp34~ Junior Member
since 2001-10-08
Posts 46Ohio, USA |
Issues are there- We must deal... even though we aren't sure on how we truelly feel. Face the facts we aren't together sometimes I think it just seems better. Please move on you need a better life don't dwell on me because I'm not worth all the strife. I'm not being mean I'm just not wasting our time we aren't meant to be... us together???? there is no reason or rhyme. I just want to be friends I'll like it that way I hope you do too and if you don't I don't know what to say. I shouldn't lead you on when my heart isn't true so its just right that you need to hear me out... I no longer love you. Love is like learning to play the piano. First you must learn to play by the rules, then you must forget the rules and play by your heart. |
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Delirious_Smurf Member
since 2001-08-08
Posts 90Nothingness,P.R. |
Oh man I can relate to this  Very good poem, thanks fer sharing! I'm a professional happy puppet. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Well, I think it's good that you be honest. Good for you  |
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Baby_Angel123 Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 63Unity, ME |
I really like this poem. Its discribes how I've been felling latly. Keep up the good work! |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
So sad and so well written. The expression is great! I hope things go well, that kind of situation hurts a lot, doesn't it? Good luck with whatever you decide! If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Oh boy do I know this one. Sucks a lot, doesn't it? Keep up the great writing.Jenn "I want love on my own terms; after everything I've ever learned. Me, I carry too much baggage..." |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
It's always good to be honest to others Though sometimes it might not look good Thanks for sharing hi Sweets  , Lizzy  , Jesa  , Ina  , Allysa  , Marie  , Cherish  , Jenn  , Chelsea  , Leah  , Kimmie  , Ashley  , Smurfy  , Alexia  , Kamie  , Kari  , Nan  , Sea  , Zu  , Lml  , Albertia  , Linc  , Jesse  , |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
I could really relate to this one.. ehhh.. never a fun situation. good luck with everything, and keep posting, this was great! Sarah *the chains which once held us are only the chains which we've made* |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Well I hope that everything worked out for you. It'd be better to break this persons heart rather than lead them on. Nice write. Take care of yourself. ~AF~ "I remember the days when I was so eager to satisfy you" |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I think its very considerate to let the person know as soon as you did because your right, its not fair to lead someone on and play with their emotions. I hope everything works out fine...good poem ShE'S nOt ThE kInDa GiRL..WhO lIkeS tO tElL tHe WorLd AbOuT tHe Way She FEEL'S aBouT hErSelf...ShE tAkEs a LiTtLe TiMe In MakIn uP hEr MiNd.. |
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DancinQueen
since 2000-07-29
Posts 1092Kokomo,IN,USA |
its so hard to finally realize you dont love someone anymore, and even harder to admit it. ive been in this situation, and i spent so much time convincing myself that i did still love him, when i really didnt, i just didnt know anything else besides him. its hard, but its always for the best, things always work out. dont worry  but neways, good write..keep it up*dq **You can't always trust the people you want to** |
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