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Knight of Secrecy
Member

since 2001-10-12

Posts 113
San Juan, Puerto Rico

0 posted 2001-10-12 08:20 PM

remember your dream isn't true
your stolen dream
was replaced,
with a dream of your own,
someone you could be
something you could own
taking your jump
you don't hit the water,
but a frozen tundra,
it's justifying the
adjudication of your dreams,
justifying
frustrated illusions,
limited imagination,
excited scent of pleasure

Innuendoes of a time
long ago, your image
remained there,
the image is gone now
the idea seemed
so far away,
by the time the water had spilled out,
the sun was out and the image was gone,
the walls can keep the secret,
your fingers can keep on living

chasing rain
Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 737
Canada

1 posted 2001-10-12 08:37 PM

Welcome to PIP!
A really good first post! Strong words in the end of the first stanza and the second stanza! You went quite deep in this one.
Anyways, I hope you enjoy it here at PIP! [insert evil laugh] Uhhh...

hehe...
Until your next post!

++ Leah ++

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

Delirious_Smurf
Member

since 2001-08-08

Posts 90
Nothingness,P.R.

2 posted 2001-10-12 09:43 PM

Well hey there!...Welcome to PIP!
Hope you like it here

Awesome first post..I loved it... very heartfelt.
Hope to see more from you soon

I'm a professional happy puppet.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-10-12 09:50 PM

Welcome and wow

great first post.

Please check your email for a special greeting!

~SEA

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

4 posted 2001-10-12 11:17 PM

WELCOME TO PIP!!! Awesome first post, and I can't wait to read more!!

If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

Marshalzu

Member Elite

since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

5 posted 2001-10-13 06:22 PM

A Magnificent first post, Welcome to Passions

"Ph33r Me I eat N00bies Ph0R bReakFAsT"
- Replying might be your only hope of getting noticed -

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-10-15 10:43 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

I do hope you enjoy this place as much as we all do
Enjoy reading as well as sharing your own work
Thanks for the wonderful first post
I'm extremely impressed
hope to see more soon

hi Sweets