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Zengo
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since 2001-05-27
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0 posted 2001-10-11 02:51 AM


It sucks I know...Just trying to vent!!

It seems it was only yesterday,
That I told you I love you,
It seems it was only a day later,
That you told me it couldn't be,
And that day is today because,
I keep reliving it everyday,
If you could only see what,
Words can't express,
You'd never doubt me again,
Some days I wish I could end,
The everlasting pain,
Of living without you,
But I can't because my heart,
Wouldn't allow myself to cause,
You the same everlasting pain...

© Copyright 2001 Nicholas Wright - All Rights Reserved
pharon
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since 1999-11-13
Posts 251
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1 posted 2001-10-11 08:06 AM


first off, i'm glad i'm not the only one who writes this early/late...secondly, great job on this one!!  hit's close to home unfortunately..but nonetheless, great job
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2 posted 2001-10-11 10:09 AM


Oyy..i cant even tell you how many days i re-live...it sux i know that...i hope one day u'll be able to reach tomorrow and the pain will fade...nice job here hun...Im sorry things turned out the way they did tho
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