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~gretchenp34~
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0 posted 2001-10-08 04:34 PM



Its been a long time
since Ive seen that smile
but it was worth that wait-
all that while.

I want you back,
once again.
You are just different
from other men.

Its the bond
that we've always shared.
Its back again-
so I know you still care.

Our eyes lock-
two hearts become one.
On my list,
you're second to none.

We'll be together
soon another day.
Love always seems
to find its way.


hey everyone im new here!!!!!!!


© Copyright 2001 Gretchen - All Rights Reserved
Marshalzu
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1 posted 2001-10-08 04:44 PM


May I be the first to welcome you to the wonderful world of Pip, I hope you have a good time here. This is a great first post, I hope to see more of you posting here  

Oh and if you just want to chat/spam goto discussions at the top of the screen and then to teen chat  

Zu

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2 posted 2001-10-08 06:26 PM


Well WELCOME!!!   nice to have you with us   I liked the very much, great first post. Do be sure to check out teen chat to get to know the gang in there its crazy fun!   Please check your email for a special greeting!   ~SEA
NathanS
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3 posted 2001-10-08 07:03 PM


Blast, i wanted to be the first to respond to such a good poem! =P
Well, im the third... nothign wrong with third i suppose  
Welcome to passion!

           -Nathan
~this is where my actual signature would go~

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4 posted 2001-10-08 11:47 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! It is so great here, just beware of... me. I love rhyming, and I'm REALLY impressed with yours! Great first post!

If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward.

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5 posted 2001-10-09 01:07 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!

Glad to see you've decided to join us here in Passions for Poetry.  I do hope you enjoy sharing your poems and reading other's poems as well.  This is a tightly nit family and you are always welcome with open hands.  If you'd like to get to know the other members of this forum, you can go to "Teen Chat" which is located at the "Discussions" forum.  Hope you enjoy this place as much as we all do.  Again, I welcome you  

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie

cherish
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6 posted 2001-10-10 03:23 AM


LMFAO @ the tight NIT family!! *scratches herself like mad*...aw man that was  a really good belly laugh..

Welcome to PiP Gretchen!!


i liked the first post from you lots. its sad, but good nonetheless   i look forward to more of your poetry--remember this is the NIT family...we're itching for more!! ( lame i know but i couldnt help myself   )

The day I stopped loving I died.


       

anonymousfemale
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7 posted 2001-10-10 11:50 AM


Welcome to Passions!!  

Love does seem to have a funny habit of making it's way through anything. it's a nice first post that has obviously receieved a warm reception.  
Remember to post as often as you reply. In doing this, you'll make a nice name for yourself and no one will want to take your legs.   jk, jk.

Thanks for sharing. I look forward to many more.  

~AF~

"I remember the days when I was so eager to satisfy you"
Nelly Furtado - On the radio

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8 posted 2001-10-11 02:06 PM


I know that im a little late but WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really hope your enjoying it here so far...i enjoyed your first poem..i cant wait to read more from you   Keep on postin and welcome!!!

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9 posted 2001-10-11 03:01 PM


Welcome to passions, and I like your poem very much, looking forward for more

Charisma

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10 posted 2001-10-17 12:19 PM


Welcome to Passions. I enjoyed this first post and surely hope to see you post more of your beautiful work up in the forum.  

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

Somewhere out there a cow is laughing at you

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