Teen Poetry #5 |
Reaching |
Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Reaching into the dark corners of my mind Trying to find words to write I come to a block, a wall if you will I can't make the words flow from my pen So much is on my mind When I go to write, I'm illiterate Reading other work I wish I could write Even to have half the words of some, I'd be thankful I can write, it's been done before So many emotions to sift through, it all clugs up And turns the pen in my hand to stone And I reach again, looking for new words But to no avail... Maybe in order to understand mankind, we have to look at the word itself: "Mankind". Basically, it's made up of two separate words - "mank" and "ind". |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Writer's block is a real pain! Have no fear tho...just as it comes, it does eventually go. Nice write. Jenn "You've got to get yourself together, you got stuck in a moment, and you can't get out of it." |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Nice way of writing about writers block. it does go though and you get this huge surge. it you're patient, good things will come. Thanks for the read. ~AF~ I look at myself in the mirror; am I vital today? |
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pharon Member
since 1999-11-13
Posts 251alabama |
you just described the story of most my life! good job me |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Thanks for the support you guys... it just seems to me that I've had writer's block for the past 6 months! And then at 1:30 in the morning today I had a brilliant piece that I'll post in a minute! Thanks again! If you define cowardice as running away and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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cherish Senior Member
since 2001-03-25
Posts 1639swimming in fairy floss........... |
CURSE the part of the brain the blocks up and doesnt want you to write!!! .....i hate writers block, especially during exams...grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...i hate my brain at those times. good job on this one though sky...enjoyed it lots wouldnt it be wonderful if children werent scared of looking up at the sky? |
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