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zarina
Member

since 2001-05-19

Posts 180

0 posted 2001-10-06 11:30 AM

Illusions broken
Waken from dreams
Heaven and Hell
one place - all the same
peace and war
rules the world
nothing's impossible
nothing's possible

black
and
white
good meets bad
where's the border
different things
can make something whole
Mysteries or Facts
what is truth?
doesn't matter
it's all there
everywhere
and this thing called love
well it's an angel
An angel in the devil's shoes
A black angel in white

sweet sugar
can pierce your throat
you can change anything
even your life can grow
don't be so safe
so afraid to show up
nothing's wrong
nothing's rigth
and the only holy thing is being

alive

*-*- this is strange. very strange. HM.*-*-*

I'm always myslef. Isn't that enough for you?

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-10-06 12:55 PM

this is neat the way you show the contradictions......well done

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

2 posted 2001-10-06 08:47 PM

I like this one a lot! I like the contrasts you used... It's great!

Maybe in order to understand mankind, we have to look at the word itself: "Mankind". Basically, it's made up of two separate words - "mank" and "ind".

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-10-07 05:34 AM

Fantastic!!! Carina, this would have to be on of your best posts yet. There is so much room for thinking and just taking in the whole piece.

"nothing's wrong
nothing's rigth
and the only holy thing is being

alive"

I love the way you did that. It ends but still leaves the door open and adding the alive part brings everything together perfectly. Wow, you have no idea how much I enjoyed reading this. I could connect with a lot of it and have, on numerous occasions, thought about exactly the same things.

Thank you very much for the read. I look forward to many more.

~AF~

I look at myself in the mirror; am I vital today?
Nelly Furtado - Hey Man

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2001-10-08 12:22 PM

                               sweet sugar
                               can pierce your throat
                               you can change anything
                               even your life can grow

LOVED that so much Carina, i think you did wonderfully with this piece- its the first ive read of yours in a while, and im greatly pleased with this one. keep writing wonderfully

wouldnt it be wonderful if children werent scared of looking up at the sky?

pharon
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 251
alabama

5 posted 2001-10-09 02:41 AM

wow....good job

me

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