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0 posted 2001-10-05 10:35 PM



if I could do it all
all over again
I would do it
regardless of the pain
all of what I've done and seen
where I've been and who I've known
has helped to shape my heart
and the directions that I've grown
I've been through heartache
like I hope you never ever know
I've been to places
I hope you never go
loved some special people
who meant the world to me
and watched them leave my life
helplessly......
I've done things
for which I am ashamed
but I took responsibility
no one else was blamed
I've given in to temptation
I've turned my back on God's light
I've found that sometimes prayer
is the only way to get through the night
I've regained my strength
after falling on my knees
ever so thankful
God heard my pleas
I know what its like
the challenges you face every day
I know the fear
of not knowing your way
life can be so scary
but on this you can depend
I'm here to help you always
and you can always call me friend

~SEA~

[This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-05-2001).]

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Jenn Cirrincione
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1 posted 2001-10-05 10:38 PM


Oh my.... wow... yea I relate to much of this. I'm still in the throes of half of the things you mentioned... I really appreciate this piece. Sometimes life lessons just hurt so much tho....

Thanks for posting this
Jenn


"You've got to get yourself together, you got stuck in a moment, and you can't get out of it."

[This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 10-05-2001).]

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2 posted 2001-10-05 10:43 PM


..I don't even know what to say about this one... it was just.. wow. THANK YOU for sharing it with us, really  

take care,
Sarah

*the chains which once held us are only the chains which we've made*
~jewel

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3 posted 2001-10-05 10:46 PM


thanks   it's just I remember what it feels like, there is soooo much to go through, and sometimes it's easier to have someone who understands and can help to clear the way a bit. or at least listen with an ear that doesn't freak out. LOL  I guess I'm just wanting you all to know, I'm here  
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4 posted 2001-10-05 10:55 PM


Oh wow! So good! Yay!  

Maybe in order to understand mankind, we have to look at the word itself: "Mankind". Basically, it's made up of two separate words - "mank" and "ind".

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5 posted 2001-10-05 11:06 PM


very nice  
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6 posted 2001-10-05 11:32 PM


That is really good.  I liked it.  Everyone needs someone to talk to and I'm glad your here for EVERYBODY.   .  Very cool.  

Later

Ex Animo,
    Aaron

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7 posted 2001-10-06 11:35 AM


aww. very nice.

I'm always myslef. Isn't that enough for you?

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8 posted 2001-10-07 05:45 AM


Aww Susan! This is so nice.  
I love what you're saying in this and I am sure that everyone here appreciates it. Hell, you're one of the coolest people around. You listen to Rob Zombie!! LOL

Honestly, it is a beautiful piece and into the library it will head to always remind me that yes, nice people DO exist.  

Take care.  

~AF~

I look at myself in the mirror; am I vital today?
Nelly Furtado - Hey Man

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9 posted 2001-10-07 10:39 AM


This piece is really Awesome I can really relate to it, thank you for sharing this with us  

Zu

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10 posted 2001-10-07 05:40 PM


Sea, that was beautifully done my friend!!

Charisma

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11 posted 2001-10-08 06:58 PM


Sea those are words everyone hopes to hear from a true friend.  
You have shown the beauty of your heart.  
Thanks for sharing.  
Hope to see more from you in here  
keep em coming

hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie

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12 posted 2001-10-12 03:15 AM


im SO glad that you psoted a piece in teen...i have at times read your poems in open but NEVEr in teen...as a teen mod i think you should post more often ...you write beautifully...i REALLY liked this one...sweet and heartfelt.

=)

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13 posted 2001-10-12 10:06 AM


I agree w/albert, im glad to see that u posted a poem here with us   I thought it was beautifully written and i think it can relate to all of us in some way...i really enjoyed it  
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14 posted 2001-10-13 01:22 AM


I really liked this poem. Keep up the good work!

"The only time I am happy is when I am dreaming of being with you..because I know in reality it will never happen."--me

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