Teen Poetry #5 |
For You....................... |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
if I could do it all all over again I would do it regardless of the pain all of what I've done and seen where I've been and who I've known has helped to shape my heart and the directions that I've grown I've been through heartache like I hope you never ever know I've been to places I hope you never go loved some special people who meant the world to me and watched them leave my life helplessly...... I've done things for which I am ashamed but I took responsibility no one else was blamed I've given in to temptation I've turned my back on God's light I've found that sometimes prayer is the only way to get through the night I've regained my strength after falling on my knees ever so thankful God heard my pleas I know what its like the challenges you face every day I know the fear of not knowing your way life can be so scary but on this you can depend I'm here to help you always and you can always call me friend ~SEA~ [This message has been edited by SEA (edited 10-05-2001).] |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Oh my.... wow... yea I relate to much of this. I'm still in the throes of half of the things you mentioned... I really appreciate this piece. Sometimes life lessons just hurt so much tho.... Thanks for posting this Jenn "You've got to get yourself together, you got stuck in a moment, and you can't get out of it." [This message has been edited by Jenn Cirrincione (edited 10-05-2001).] |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
..I don't even know what to say about this one... it was just.. wow. THANK YOU for sharing it with us, really take care, Sarah *the chains which once held us are only the chains which we've made* |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thanks it's just I remember what it feels like, there is soooo much to go through, and sometimes it's easier to have someone who understands and can help to clear the way a bit. or at least listen with an ear that doesn't freak out. LOL I guess I'm just wanting you all to know, I'm here |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Oh wow! So good! Yay! Maybe in order to understand mankind, we have to look at the word itself: "Mankind". Basically, it's made up of two separate words - "mank" and "ind". |
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NathanS Member
since 2001-09-27
Posts 106CA |
very nice |
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aaron woodside Member
since 2001-09-26
Posts 256 |
That is really good. I liked it. Everyone needs someone to talk to and I'm glad your here for EVERYBODY. . Very cool. Later Ex Animo, Aaron |
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zarina Member
since 2001-05-19
Posts 180 |
aww. very nice. I'm always myslef. Isn't that enough for you? |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Aww Susan! This is so nice. I love what you're saying in this and I am sure that everyone here appreciates it. Hell, you're one of the coolest people around. You listen to Rob Zombie!! LOL Honestly, it is a beautiful piece and into the library it will head to always remind me that yes, nice people DO exist. Take care. ~AF~ I look at myself in the mirror; am I vital today? |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This piece is really Awesome I can really relate to it, thank you for sharing this with us Zu "Ph33r Me I eat N00bies Ph0R bReakFAsT" |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sea, that was beautifully done my friend!! Charisma |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Sea those are words everyone hopes to hear from a true friend. You have shown the beauty of your heart. Thanks for sharing. Hope to see more from you in here keep em coming hi Sweets, Lizzy, Jesa, Ina, Allysa, Marie, Erica, Minna, Kit, Kamie, Javi, Jenn, Sharon, Nan, Cawlee, Cherish, Chelsea, Baker, Leah, Jess, Kimmie |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
im SO glad that you psoted a piece in teen...i have at times read your poems in open but NEVEr in teen...as a teen mod i think you should post more often ...you write beautifully...i REALLY liked this one...sweet and heartfelt. =) |
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xShUgArHiGhx
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I agree w/albert, im glad to see that u posted a poem here with us I thought it was beautifully written and i think it can relate to all of us in some way...i really enjoyed it |
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yankey102002 New Member
since 2001-10-13
Posts 4Alabama |
I really liked this poem. Keep up the good work! "The only time I am happy is when I am dreaming of being with you..because I know in reality it will never happen."--me |
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