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DragonFang Senior Member
since 2000-03-09
Posts 522Missouri, USA |
Far far away, in a land long past I oft' believe my dreams to grand to last An angel soaring on wings of gold So beautiful that I long to hold The moon rides high above Stars are shinning with eternal love Soft grass beneath me feet As I run so quickly to to whome I meet My angel in my arms embraced Forever in our love enlaced. "Sa souvraya niende missian ye." \ |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Beautiful! This was a great combination between the romantic and the mystical. Great job here. You might want to look at your spelling in the piece in a few places. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
This was absolutely beautiful  nice job! |
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mistic Member
since 2001-05-06
Posts 233Idaho, U.S.A. |
you already know what i think about this sweetie i still say it's great and i love it.Life is an open book with many unwritten pages, write something that's meaningful to you there. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
one word........BEAUTIFUL!!! hi Sweets  , Lizzy  , Jesa  , Ina  , Allysa  , Marie  , Cherish  , Jenn  , Chelsea  , Leah  , Kimmie  , Ashley  , Smurfy  , Alexia  , Kamie  , Kari  , Nan  , Sea  , Zu  , Lml  , Albertia  , Linc  , Jesse  , |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I really like your writing! Just awesome!!! If you define cowardice as running away, tripping and screaming at the first sign of danger, then yes, Mister Brave Man, I guess I am a coward. |
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