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anonymous albert ?
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0 posted 2001-09-29 02:59 AM


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Bouncing squares scene…
      Helpless screams in blackness,
Red stain. Everywhere


[This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 09-29-2001).]

© Copyright 2001 ALBY - All Rights Reserved
chasing rain
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1 posted 2001-09-29 04:48 PM


Red stain? EVERYWHERE? GAH!!! Is it blood??? How gory...oO;
hehe. Is this your first senryu albish? Cuz I haven't seen any before till today, and they're pretty good. Go write more. MORE! Or suffer my wrath...*background: what wrath?*

What's with the "." ? lol, nutcase.  

~Leah

Va pensiero sull' ali dorate...

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2 posted 2001-09-29 06:16 PM


Hmmmmm interesting!!  
Coolness Alberta, keep it up.

Jenn

"In the words of a broken heart, it's just emotion taking me over; you'll never see me fall apart, in the words of a broken heart."

anonymousfemale
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3 posted 2001-09-30 12:56 PM


*hides before he throws large objects at her*

Albertia!! Sunshine!! You're going to kill me. *gulps* I'm still figuring what it's about that's why I haven't posted it! Don't hate me....please?  
Tell you what, I'll dedicate an entire piece to your brilliance IF you decide to be nice and not kill me.   lol

Take care buddy.

~AF~

"Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination"

Spice
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4 posted 2001-10-14 10:44 PM


HMmmmm...Hi Alby!  
Nice write...Whats a Senryu? HeHeHe
TEACH ME! I'm willing to learn! LOL

Every now and then I like to stick my foot in my mouth...

Zukene_Chic
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5 posted 2001-10-14 10:45 PM


WOW! creepy! I like!
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6 posted 2001-10-15 08:00 AM


Hehehehehehe me like  
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7 posted 2001-12-21 03:23 PM


ok, I'm gonna need some explanation here
I know you love to write gruesome poems
but I still don't get it

là où est mon amour?
donde está mi amour?
wo ist meine Liebe?
Nelly Furtado é a menina a mais bonita no mundo largo do todo.


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8 posted 2001-12-22 09:33 AM


lol@ all the lil' nicknames albert has from the wierdOs. yesh we all know alberts a wierdO too. neways....I Liked It! Not a big fan of this style but this one was a wee bit different..hmm maybe the gruesome part? ya think?! yesh i think so. I agree with Leah, do some more senryus! Nice job Albert. The title is what made me curious. *loved the title*
tiff


“A single choice can build destinies,or destroy them.”

I know Im not perfect but I can smile
& I hope that you c this heart behind my tired eyes

[This message has been edited by knightlyshadows (12-22-2001 09:34 AM).]

anonymousfemale
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9 posted 2001-12-23 08:49 AM


A piece from the heart,
Filled with such mortal sadness
Deserves a small bump.

If this is all the world has to offer, I want a refund on my life.

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10 posted 2001-12-23 12:55 PM


hmmmmmm yes alby is a nerdy weirdo but ya gotta love em! creepy yet intresting love it alby!
robin

repeat after me and rhonda : TITUS RULES THE EARTH!! ( i saw your sig rhon! lol)

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