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Raven Skye Member
since 2001-03-03
Posts 112.In a House. 
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There's a lot going on right now. Sorry I haven't been around. This is a song. The ending might sound a little funny if you read it but when it's sung and played along with the melody then it sounds pretty good. I gotta get some mp3's made. heh... well feedback is appreciated... I hope to catch up with all the poems I missed!! Once again I'm sorry... Try to make it through the day but you can’t seem to stop crying. Try to figure out what’s wrong, but whats the use with all this trying. Try to help yourself feel better, but constantly feeling like you’re dying because you... Give up Move on Not worth Time spent Messed up Whole life Can’t deal Is it over yet? Cry because no one loves you Pain like a dagger hits so bad. Cry for the things you’ve lost, But you are still hopeless and so sad. Cry because there is nothing left to do but stop cuz you’re getting really mad because you... Give up Move on Not worth Time spent Messed up Whole life Can’t deal Is it over yet? Don't take your life, it's not you decision. Put your life in God's hands, carry out with your mission. Don't ever give up... please make the right decision... I'm here for you... *×´¨`·.×*Raven Skye*×´¨`·.×* |
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Delirious_Smurf Member
since 2001-08-08
Posts 90Nothingness,P.R. |
Veyr cool I loved the ending...it was great!  I'm a professional happy puppet. |
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Jezziekaka Member
since 2001-08-21
Posts 58where the trees touch the sky |
Wow! I sure hope you do not feel real bad. I like the ending too! Jezzika be dangerous, unpredictable, and make a lot of noise! |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Ooo this is great. It would sound awesome to a melody but I was singing it and it came out. Hurry up with the MP3's..lol.  It said a lot and for that, it goes to the library.  ~AF~ "Reality is only a feeble rendering of the energy brought forth by the imagination" |
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FoxXena Member
since 2001-06-13
Posts 141where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted |
A very good song/poem that goes along with these troubled times. ~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~ |
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