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Poet Unknown
Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 140
Missouri

0 posted 2001-09-11 02:50 PM

For those who believed in good,
For the ones who's ground they stood.
For those who's lives were took,
And the families they shook.
For those who believed in what's right,
For those who fell out of sight.
For those that gave their lives,
And the children husbands and wives.
For those who made this country great,
For those spread from state to state.
For the ones who believed in freedom,
And those that help make our kingdom.
For the ones who lost their life,
For the families left to strife.
For the children left behind,
And those we have yet to find.

In remembrance of all those who died today in the terrorist attacks-September, 11, 2001

Do as you please....strike forth down upon your knees...Darkness Falls on Those Without Souls

Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

1 posted 2001-09-11 04:28 PM

I was gonna make a poem like this...you beat me to it! VERY good by the way!

cutie2005
Member

since 2000-04-30

Posts 148
Bennett, Colorado USA

2 posted 2001-09-11 11:13 PM

You beat me to it too... but i'm still going to, this is getting to me big time!! I really liked your poem it was awesome!!! Thanks for the read!
Luv,
Amanda

If you love someone you would go to the end of the world for them!

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

3 posted 2001-09-12 12:49 PM

well done kyle, a very , for want of a better word, nice tribute.

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punkrockerrobin

Senior Member

since 2001-05-15

Posts 1180
Sparks, NV

4 posted 2001-09-12 01:26 AM

very well done! good work.
robin

Things I Have Learned I've learned that you cannot make someone love you. All you can do is stalk them and hope they panic and give in

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2001-09-13 04:15 AM

"For the children left behind,
And those we have yet to find."

Those two lines hit me the hardest. Children are too innocent to be lost...
It's a great piece and gives a good description of the event well.

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

6 posted 2001-09-13 10:06 AM

Your words were beautiful...

LyricFetish
Senior Member

since 2000-01-13

Posts 528
North Carolina

7 posted 2001-09-13 01:45 PM

Your poem truly touched me. I live in NY and the pain and desolation everywhere are captured in your words, but also hope and promise. Thank you.

*~Meredith~*

I'll just keep on laughing,
Hiding the tears in my eyes...
*Oleander

FoxXena
Member

since 2001-06-13

Posts 141
where dragons play, children run free and foxes are never hunted

8 posted 2001-09-13 03:01 PM

This is great. I did do a poem like this, and I do hope that we catch the culprit and give him a taste of American Justice.

~*~It is said that laughter is the shortest distance between two people...~*~
~*~I say it is the written word.~*~

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

9 posted 2001-09-14 02:03 AM

Awesome kid....

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

10 posted 2001-09-16 02:49 AM

Nice tribute poem, though it's sad there was even such an event that needed a tribute. *sigh*
Lizzy took my fav lines.

United we stand, Divided we fall.
Never say die.

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