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Teen Poetry #5

What Happened?

Allysa

Senior Member

since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2001-09-06 07:41 PM

What happened to what we had?
Did you just give it all away?
Did you decide I wasn't worth it?
Did you just let go and not tell me?
What happened to the you in "us"?
Because I'm sure that I'm still there.
Did you deciede I wasn't important?
Did you just decide to not care?
What happened to the love we had?
Did you not see what we had?
Did you give it all away for someone else?
Did you just decide you didn't love me?
What happened?

Sugarpie313 married my poem! (that's my poem, not your poem! pooh!)

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

1 posted 2001-09-06 08:11 PM

woah... i know EXACTLY how you felt when you worte this... it was like you read my mind... if you want to talk you can e mail me at teenie2003@hotmail.com i'd love to chat, i hope you have better luck than i am...
*Pixie*

-=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=-

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

2 posted 2001-09-07 10:07 AM

He sounds like a jerk. Whatever you do, don't tear yourself apart with questions like this.

Keep your head up though. Email me whenever you need to.

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

3 posted 2001-09-07 10:11 AM

I agree w/anonoymous...he does sound like a jerk if he would do this to you. What did happen?? You should find out because your worth it...Dont let him be in control hun!! Excellent poem but very sad

i hope things work out for the best

Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

4 posted 2001-09-08 02:03 AM

I must say, I'm with E.J. on this one as well.
Hope all is well. Those thoughts can kill sometimes...Thanks for the read.

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

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