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Teen Poetry #5

Flowers (Acrostic)

Jezziekaka
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since 2001-08-21

Posts 58
where the trees touch the sky

0 posted 2001-09-05 08:48 PM

Fragrance, everyone
Loves that smell
On the beautiful flowers bees buzz
We pick a lot of them
Everyone stops to smell them
Ready to give them to someone
Special

* For Sunshine, thank you for inspiring me to write each day.

~Jezzika~

be dangerous, unpredictable, and make a lot of noise!

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-09-06 09:07 AM

Jezzie! An Acrostic! These are not easy, but you made it flow down the page with your thoughts! What a wonderful gift for everyone!

Can your house really stand TWO poets? Well of course it can! Well done, my dear!

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

2 posted 2001-09-06 09:25 AM

Jezzie!!..this is so sweet!!

me likes this one lots! its really really cute. i thought you did very well on this! keep posting girly

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Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-09-06 02:30 PM

JezziKaKa~
Just look at you glow !
Acrostics are not the easiest to learn ...
but I'd say you've learned it pretty gosh-darned good !
Nice piece, hon~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2001-09-06 02:35 PM

Jezziekaka-
   Wow!  I have to echo the others...
   these are NOT easy!
   You certainly have done a wonderful
   job on this one though!
   Nicely penned!

   Hugs,
   ~vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

5 posted 2001-09-07 03:35 AM

This is very cute and it's great to see that someone has inspired you to such a creative degree.

Thanks for sharing and I hope to see more.

~AF~

"Kelly's my Hero!" "No, Kelly's your heroine." "Kelly has heroin??" "What?"

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