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Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

0 posted 2001-09-04 03:34 PM

Well, fellow PIP Pals! This is one of my complete...love poems! I say it's pretty good! Let me have your input, please!

A Thought of Her

When I talk to her my words are stolen away from me,
by the angel's voice that is trapped in her throat.
A single thought of her brings it all back.

To part from her is like to leave home. The pain and sorrow...
It's too great to bear!
A single thought of her takes all that pain away.

For the days where I'm down on my luck, I'm ready to scream!
When I don't have the courage, the strength to go on...
A single thought of her helps me through the day.

Her smile melts ice, and her tears move mountains.
I'd fight wars to keep those tears from flowing...
But first I'll have to fight the tears of my own...

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Thanks for putting up with my trash! Lol j/k

~ Alex

SunShine913

Member

since 2001-08-19

Posts 211
Italy but from NC

1 posted 2001-09-04 04:46 PM

Hey i really liked this one .. it was sweet and sad... very good for the first one i have read of yours.. makes me smile.. so keep writing and i will keep reading

!~Andrea~!
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Spice
Senior Member

since 2001-04-13

Posts 1266
Resting in my cardboard box.

2 posted 2001-09-04 05:40 PM

Perhaps We'll look at Spice's favorite line..Shall we?
"I'd fight wars to keep those tears from flowing..."
HeHe, I LOVEd that line.
Very nice write here!

You wouldn't worry about what people thought about you if you knew how seldom they did.

anonymous albert ?

Member Elite

since 2001-03-23

Posts 2979

3 posted 2001-09-04 11:36 PM

"But first I'll have to fight the tears of my own..."

something we should do. before we do for others...huh?...i enjoyed the read.

if i die before i wake...i pray the Lord my soul to take - when thugs cry-

cherish
Senior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 1639
swimming in fairy floss...........

4 posted 2001-09-04 11:39 PM

I'd fight wars to keep those tears from flowing...

awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!..this is sooooooooooooo sweet!

but at the same time sad too- why are you crying alex? i hope they're tears of joy and not sorrow! *hugs* well done on this one here alex you did very well with it and HELLS BLOODY NO its NOT TRASH you silly silly silly boy!

sweet and sad/happy/awwwww-ish is what i call it

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Android 17

Senior Member

since 2001-07-21

Posts 664
Winnipeg

5 posted 2001-09-07 01:22 PM

Thanks y'all for your kind words!

Andrea- Thanks for your words of encouragment!

Spice- I love that line too!

Alberta- Interesting...

Cherish- Wow! Thanks...and unfortunatley they're tears of sorrow...but I'll make it! Especially with all of you around! ^_^

Thank you all for your support!

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