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Aimster
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0 posted 2001-06-03 06:48 PM


"Annette"
Amy M. Kennedy

Two souls that share a love
A love that is so true
Those two souls being
No other than me and you

Two hearts that share a secret
A secret softly whispered at night
When two lovers hold one another bracing
Never letting go, always holding tight

Two lovers that share a dream
A dream to be together
Gently holding onto that dream
Always and forever

I'll never love another
Not the way I love you
So completely and fully
A love ever-lasting and true

Yes, I've loved before
But it was never like this
Just sheer happiness and joy
A feeling of utter bliss

And even through the hard times
Times even like today
I'll still love you just the same
Each and everyday

If you ever wonder
What you mean to me
Look into these eyes of blue
For then you shall see

That this heart holds yours
And you hold mine in your hand
Then maybe you'll begin to realize
And begin to understand

That for as long as you shall have me
By your side I will stay
No more finding love in the arms of another
I'll be with you everyday

But to get to that point my darlin'
You must first believe in who you are
And realize that though you make mistakes
To me you're a shining star

I'm by no means perfect
But I feel flawless when I'm with you
I just want you to know Annette
That I am deeply in love with you

Though the miles seperate us
And things are not ideal
Still these are my feelings
They are very real

I sit here in my room
As shadows play against the wall
Holding my breath just waiting
For the next call

You say that you aren't good enough for me
And that I should move on with a new start
Please tell me how to do that
When you have my soul and heart

Two lovers in the night
Who will find their way in the day
Together forever I want to be with you
Come whatever may

I love you!

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."  


© Copyright 2001 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2001-06-03 06:53 PM


Wow! What a heartfelt yearning poem with such feeling.  The author shows so many loyal devoted qualities.........I can only hope it works out!  
Good poem Amy!

Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2001-06-03 06:58 PM


A beautiful outpouring from your heart! I love it.  
Logan
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3 posted 2001-06-03 07:23 PM


marvelous, such a fine tribute of love and feelings...very very good job..gentle smile
Dark Angel
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4 posted 2001-06-03 07:28 PM


You express beautifully, love and feelings Miss Amy  

I certainly hope you have given her this.

Well Done

Maree  

Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2001-06-03 07:33 PM


This is just such sweet expression of love.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Marsha
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6 posted 2001-06-03 07:43 PM


Darling girl, utterly wonderful, how glad I am to see your heart displayed and know that the feelings are both true and reciprocated. Fabulous writing as always darling girl you haven't lost your touch at all. Perfect dear heart, absolutely perfect.
Take care little sister
Love and warm stuff
as always
Mushy

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Mr»ÄlleÿÇät
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7 posted 2001-06-03 07:53 PM


A wonderful compelling work, it was a joy to read.
Thank you
Mr»ÄlleÿÇät


Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25
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8 posted 2001-06-03 08:18 PM


Amy this poem is outstanding an very very beautiful an true with your words shining
through as bright as your poetic heart,i only hope everything will work out.
if someone i cared about gave me this poem i would be smitten an in their arms forever.
hope she will realize how much you do love her  

Lone Wolf
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Lansing, MI USA
9 posted 2001-06-03 08:22 PM


Amy, what a wonderful display of emotion and insight.  This was truly beautiful throughout each line.  It is good to see you back and feeling so good about things.  Great writing!  Take care, my friend.  

LW

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

EagleOne
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10 posted 2001-06-04 03:43 AM


A wonderful expression of love, I hope you pass this on. You take care, wonderful to see your work again!

"Friends are quiet angels who lift us to our
feet when our wings have trouble remembering how to fly." ~unknown


Janet Marie
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11 posted 2001-06-04 11:16 AM


We do so love ya in love Amy-girl...
so nice to see you so very inspired
and to see the sunshine back in your poetry
and your name back here.  
jm

I'm not right ... you're not wrong ...
Still I dont know ... what this love of ours is built upon.

Jamie
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12 posted 2001-06-04 12:31 PM


Keep  

There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar.
byron

Sven
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13 posted 2001-06-04 08:16 PM


now, you know that I had to reply to this one my wonderful friend. . .

it's beautiful, just like the heart that created it. . .  

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Aimster
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14 posted 2001-06-05 07:34 PM


thank you all for your wonderful
heartfelt replies. as always they mean
the world to me. you make this girl
smile! love you all.

love
amy  

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."  


Kendaall
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since 2001-05-15
Posts 15

15 posted 2001-06-07 02:31 PM


Darlin, I can't find the words to express how much your love means to me. Thank you for coming into my life. To have the great fortune at my age to meet such a lovely, intelligent,strong, mature woman who desires spending time with me is beyond anything i could ever have imagined. So thank you for loving me, I have forever changed for the better.  Lovingly, Annette
OLIAS
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Pearl city Iowa
16 posted 2001-06-07 02:35 PM


Great Work, I enjoyed this very much, heartfelt emotion and great tenderness. Thanks for sharing.

Regards,
Olias.

Temptress
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17 posted 2001-06-08 01:53 AM


WHERE have you been?   It matters not. I'm glad you're here anyway. This was a lovely outpouring of honesty and love. I enjoyed reading.  

Sudhir Iyer
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Mumbai, India : now in Belgium
18 posted 2001-06-08 08:09 AM


Amy, my friend, you have been away and you have been missed... but I am glad that while you were away, you came back with LOVE....  

I am all   for you...

Take Care,
Regards,
Sudhir

Aimster
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Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
19 posted 2001-06-09 11:32 AM


WOWOW
i never expected responses like this.
thank you all from the bottom of my
heart for all that you do. make this
girl smile and realise she has a special
place to always go home to. love you

amy  

p.s. darlin,
i love you so very much. so glad i
could share you here with all these
wonderful and amazing friends of mine!

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."  


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