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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-06-02 08:49 AM

A trace of fingernail's concern
I want for lion's back to yearn
in arch of scratch beneath the wing--
I long to hear the griffin sing.

Into the forest of a man,
a warrior, of broad-chest-plan,
into the forage of his mind,
a corridor of up-hill climb,
a vision quest of amber eyes
and sparks of gold to preach sunrise.

All the shadow in his brow
speaks my past and future vows.
All that he is--I am (could be)
A spark of him.
A spark of me...
beginning's end, eternity.
A lion roars, grateful of wing
in a canyon's heart of sing
I feel a flutter
flapping wings
and raise my voice
to plead rejoice--
with all life brings?
A griffin sings.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-06-02 08:54 AM

I see the stone lips moving...

Enjoyed this one!

ArticulatedSigh
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 26

2 posted 2001-06-02 08:54 AM

I had never thought of the winged ones song. Must be a melody unique and strong.

For the moment swallows all things blinding our eyes to Heaven.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2001-06-02 09:22 AM

Wow..this just SINGS off the page. I love it!!! Find a cool graphic to go with it and put it on your homepage.

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-06-02 10:35 AM

and just what would the song of the Griffin be??? That lends itself to many thoughts and ideas. . .

great job serenity, this flows wonderfully. . . and the images are wonderful. . .

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Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-06-02 11:03 AM

http://community.webshots.com/album/12878221PUPSLEBVYx

Im searchin for my warrior
walkin the tracks of time
this struggle to seek forgiveness
like chains and shackles...these ghosts of mine

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

6 posted 2001-06-02 11:04 AM

A table sits in my den, two winged griffins for legs..I read, then look to see if they would sing as I have heard them before..you brought back old memories..thank you, enjoyed the read...gentle smile

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2001-06-02 11:06 AM

I was looking for something about Merv

Well done!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. Philip Sidney (1554-1586) Loving in Truth

Watersign6
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since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

8 posted 2001-06-02 11:09 AM

well done an i love every line of it

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2001-06-02 11:14 AM

Serenity~
This is marvelous !
Beautiful flow ...

You would have to know that I would love this ...

'Into the forest of a man,
a warrior, of broad-chest-plan,
into the forage of his mind,
a corridor of up-hill climb,
a vision quest of amber eyes
and sparks of gold to preach sunrise.'

LOL @ InterLoper !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

10 posted 2001-06-02 12:27 PM

How I enjoyed this entire thread from the poem on down!

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

11 posted 2001-06-02 12:33 PM

Celeste that Janet Marie sure can find the appropiate pictures can't she?
This is marvelously written! I must visit your home site!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

12 posted 2001-06-02 12:33 PM

enjoyable stuff here, glad I came in to read before I head out for my walk.

I've had so much trouble navigating here today, in almost an hour, I've only been able to get in to 3 or 4 things.

Hope it gets better later. Maybe it's just because of how busy the forum is right now.

brian madden
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since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

13 posted 2001-06-02 04:19 PM

I feel a flutter
flapping wings
and raise my voice
to plead rejoice--
with all life brings?
A griffin sings.

This soars from the depths of somewhere beautiful. Your weaved your magic with this one I can tell.

"difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true
Brutal and mocking but always therea crutch for enmity's saddest glare"

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