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ArticulatedSigh
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 26

0 posted 2001-06-02 12:31 PM

Who
will sow
the seeds
of gentleness
into

These fields
of woe
and unacceptance
tolerance
unknown

To raise
the wheat
of tenderness
amidsts acres
of grief

Twixt weeds
of insincerity
toil thy fields
with loves eyes
only

for they
alone
define all
that is
eternity

For the moment swallows all things blinding our eyes to Heaven.

[This message has been edited by ArticulatedSigh (edited 06-02-2001).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

1 posted 2001-06-02 01:05 AM

amidsts acres
of grief

Twixt weeds
of insincerity
toil thy fields
with loves eyes
only

for they
alone
define all
that is
eternity
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very cool...
the format and presentation added to this ones pleasures...
great use of theme and imagery.
well done

Im searchin for my warrior
walkin the tracks of time
this struggle to seek forgiveness
like chains and shackles...these ghosts of mine

SilentSongs
Junior Member

since 2001-05-31

Posts 43
Mist of Time

2 posted 2001-06-02 01:22 AM

Thank you, I appreciate your words intersting if only life were thus.

Thanks again for sharing

"The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance."

[This message has been edited by SilentSongs (edited 06-02-2001).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-06-02 07:35 AM

A wonderful weed-killer....love...

An enjoyable read, thank you! Leaves one pondering....

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2001-06-02 07:36 AM

I don't know who will sow them but I know they are out there and they will be planted if you want to reap the benefits of gentleness and love.........and......

                                         "for they
                                           alone
                                          define all
                                           that is
                                          eternity."

I like the whole poem but I especially love that line

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

5 posted 2001-06-02 07:37 AM

very very enjoyable,keep writing

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

6 posted 2001-06-02 02:25 PM

These fields
of woe
and unacceptance
tolerance
unknown

All gardens need tending to... really enjoeyd the poem,

"difference between love and comfortis that comfort's more reliable and true
Brutal and mocking but always therea crutch for enmity's saddest glare"

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

7 posted 2001-06-02 02:27 PM

You are sowing seeds of love and wisdom with your poetry. Joyce

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

8 posted 2001-06-02 02:30 PM

Who
will sow
the seeds
of gentleness

I so love that stanza, it's a question that begs a response, not in word, but in deed.

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