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Mabel A. Dilley
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0 posted 2001-05-31 12:47 PM





lining riverbeds
Betula strobili fall
Autumn becomes you

"I am not now that which I have been."

© Copyright 2001 Mabel A. Dilley - All Rights Reserved
theLadypoet
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1 posted 2001-05-31 12:56 PM


Took my breath away!!

I like this site and am glad to have
found you here also.

theLadypoet
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2 posted 2001-05-31 01:00 PM


Lovely haiku.  Very nicely done.

PM

Panne447
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3 posted 2001-05-31 01:13 PM


Julian,
Very nice indeed and so was the pic. Panne

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4 posted 2001-05-31 01:14 PM


Never peeled it, but picked it up and we wrote on it, brought back memories Mabe of writing poetry as a kid on pieces of poplar bark down by the river in Winnipeg.  I called my friend right after reading this to remind her of it and say hello!  Thanks for a beautiful haiku and an absolutely wonderful memory.
Mabel A. Dilley
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5 posted 2001-05-31 01:20 PM


Sisterwolf: very good to see you here as well.

Poeminister and Panne: thank you so much for reading this simple haiku

Mysteria: I'm particularly found of birch, specifically European white birch.

"I am not now that which I have been."

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2001-05-31 11:50 PM


Julian~
This is exquisite !
~*Marge*~

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Mabel A. Dilley
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7 posted 2001-06-01 12:08 PM


Marge: thank you so much for reading.

"I am not now that which I have been."

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