Silent Songs an Acrostic poem

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SilentSongs
Junior Member

since 2001-05-31

Posts 43
Mist of Time

0 posted 2001-05-31 07:25 AM

Silent songs
In deepening night
Lost to ears but surely
Ever heart felt weight carried
Not on winds nor waves or lyres so made
Touching in mournful moments only unspoken emotions

Sorrow filled tears impaled melodies of
Old one last hope placed with headstone carved
No mourners tears only unheralded rememberances
Grips the soul in agony's blinding iron fist
Songs of lost dreams dead, the eternal dirge I sing

"The past my prison, confined in voiceless penance"

[This message has been edited by SilentSongs (edited 05-31-2001).]

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

1 posted 2001-05-31 07:27 AM

this is incredible,i enjoyed it so very much
thank you for sharing

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-05-31 07:29 AM

               "Grips the soul in agony's blinding iron fist
                Songs of lost dreams dead the eternal dirge I sing

                "The past my prison, confined in voiceless penance"

I really like these lines....well written you've captured the reflective side of the mood!

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

3 posted 2001-05-31 08:19 AM

This magnificent song you penned came straight from your soul to our hearts! Wonderful writing, my new friend, and it is so good to have you here!!!

The road goes on forever, and the stories never end...

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

4 posted 2001-05-31 08:43 AM

Excellent acrostic....welcome to passions

Ruth

~ Ruth
www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-05-31 09:39 AM

A wonderful first entrance to Passions! Welcome, and please, check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-06-02 05:10 PM

a song that is silent no longer. . .

welcome!!

I hope you'll like it here. . .

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Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

7 posted 2001-06-02 05:49 PM

Welcome to Passions. This is a deep poem.
I might suggest some shortened line breaks but other than that I truly enjoyed it.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

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