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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

0 posted 2001-05-31 02:43 AM

I'll let it go.
I'll let it bleed.
Go back to what I used to be.
If I can remember, who?
me before the alchemy
of just a wish of thought of you--
osmosis--gnosis--
watered seed
in plant of you
in fertile ground
in love with you
the silent sound
that echoes roaring
in my ear...
the pulse of you
to pound my fear
that you would have no part of me...

I should have known.
I should have seen.
I should have left it
unforseen
leaving well enough alone--
I should have seen.
I should have known.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-05-31 02:47 AM

"in love with you
the silent sound
that echoes roaring
in my ear...
the pulse of you
to pound my fear
that you would have no part of me..."

wow.........this is amazing

SEA

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2001-05-31 02:47 AM

Celeste I really love this writing........

                               "Go back to what I used to be.
                                     If I can remember, who?
                                     me before the alchemy
                                  of just a wish of thought of you--
                                       osmosis--gnosis--
                                        watered seed
                                        in plant of you
                                        in fertile ground
                                        in love with you
                                       the silent sound
                                      that echoes roaring
                                         in my ear...
                                       the pulse of you
                                       to pound my fear
                                that you would have no part of me...

sad but so beautifully written!  Keep looking, you'll reconstruct your within to without!

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-05-31 09:38 AM

I'll let it go.
I'll let it bleed.
Go back to what I used to be.
If I can remember, who?
me before the alchemy
of just a wish of thought of you--
====================
the silent sound
that echoes roaring
in my ear...
the pulse of you
to pound my fear
that you would have no part of me...
I should have known.
I should have seen.
I should have left it
unforseen
leaving well enough alone--
I should have seen.
I should have known.
=======================

"I'll let it go.
I'll let it bleed.
Go back to what I used to be.
If I can remember, who?"

god, dont I know baby...
if its possible to do ... I havent learned how
this just aches K...you rhyme your heart in poetic perfection me twin,
and we feel evry word.

me

I'm hanging on your every word
Even if you dont want to speak tonite
It's alright
I'm sitting outside heaven's door
listening to you breathe

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

4 posted 2001-05-31 09:41 AM

God, I loved this!!! That opening verse, the whole thing...ached

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

OLIAS
Senior Member

since 2000-06-20

Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

5 posted 2001-06-01 06:03 PM

Powerful write with great sadness, the pleasure and the pain is we never know. I enjoyed the truth in your words.

Regards,
Olias.

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

6 posted 2001-06-01 06:07 PM

i love this poem

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

7 posted 2001-06-02 12:36 PM

Oh hon...this is just devastating...

wonderfully worked for it though...

K

It is to do with tree-ferns:
mamuka, pongo, wheki.
Shelter under here is so easily understood.
From 'Hope', by Dinah Hawkins

SilentSongs
Junior Member

since 2001-05-31

Posts 43
Mist of Time

8 posted 2001-06-02 12:46 PM

Of such I would
I think understand
my penance my hope
of love and acceptance
denied in melody rent as life

You brings words to touch us all.

My thanks

"The past my prison, confined in solitary voiceless penance."

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