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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2001-05-30 07:09 PM

What truth do gentle winds make
on evenings full of beguile,
the last seconds before the knock
and the phone is dropped.
None greater the silent clouds
that stood attentive to this scene
as a door was opened, a glance given
for the stranger though what stranger indeed.
Two beats of the heart came and went
as first appearences gave way to smiles
then the first touch, electric
hugs became our world apart.
A year ago, almost to the day
I felt the path of pleasent pain
I drove for days to see her face
and nothing would remain the same.
Though now she lives futher away
my heart can still feel her kiss
the way she slept within my arms
and the summer spent in Kelowna.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-05-30 07:50 PM

This poem spoke to my heart.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

RebeccaJoy
Junior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 35

2 posted 2001-05-30 08:39 PM

You've written this memory well. Full of emotion.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-05-30 08:44 PM

MichaelG~
Just lovely !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

4 posted 2001-05-30 09:01 PM

Michael, how beautiful. Is it distance makes the heart grow fonder? You do have some pretty romantic memories. ME

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

5 posted 2001-05-30 09:54 PM

What truth do gentle winds make
on evenings full of beguile,
==============================
A year ago, almost to the day
I felt the path of pleasent pain
I drove for days to see her face
and nothing would remain the same.
Though now she lives futher away
my heart can still feel her kiss
the way she slept within my arms
and the summer spent in Kelowna.

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"traces left behind" ... some things never leave us ...
some things never should.
this is beautiful Michael...and touches me, as I remember all the reasons.
take care gentle poet.
jm

I'm hanging on your every word
Even if you dont want to speak tonite
It's alright
I'm sitting outside heaven's door
listening to you breathe

Jenn E
Senior Member

since 2000-08-02

Posts 589
Kelowna, BC, Canada

6 posted 2001-06-01 04:06 PM

Changed forever........Ones heart never forgets......
Beautiful...
As Always
Jenn E

Decaflame
Senior Member

since 2001-05-11

Posts 1635

7 posted 2001-06-01 04:15 PM

A remarkable memory....

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