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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-05-30 04:52 PM

Welcome to my Heart

welcome
to my heart
sweet
invited guest
never
shall you part
there
you are pressed
silent
in the seams
filling
broken cracks
polishing
till it gleams
within
selfless acts
things
that were broken
slowly
become mended
with
words spoken
and unspoken
hurt and heal
now blended

"...the rest is silence" (Hamlet) Shakespeare

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-05-30 05:04 PM

A perfect blend of words and emotion...so deserved the healing.

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

2 posted 2001-05-30 05:22 PM

Clap, clap, bravo, enjoyed it.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

3 posted 2001-05-30 06:15 PM

This flowed beautifully.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

4 posted 2001-05-30 06:21 PM

oh how i enjoyed this one,way to go

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

5 posted 2001-05-30 06:31 PM

Well crafted!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-05-30 07:28 PM

helen, the flow of this is absolutely incredible. . . the emotions are just totally amazing. . .

you have shown this heart well. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

7 posted 2001-05-30 07:57 PM

Lovely!

MyEnchanted_Melody
Senior Member

since 2001-05-30

Posts 1106
across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.

8 posted 2001-05-30 09:30 PM

I'm so new here but if I may venture to say my opinion I'd simply say that......
I Loved it.........the sheer simplicity of it makes it sooo beautiful.

Thank u

DonFurr
Member

since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

9 posted 2001-05-31 12:15 PM

How well you discribe your healing.
I remember when you helped me heal in the same way.
Your words are the ones I only wished I could have found to thank you.

Dear Lady you are in my heart forever,
and it still shines with the polished sheen you left there.

S Arthur Grey
Senior Member

since 2001-03-19

Posts 719
woven by a poet's loom

10 posted 2001-06-09 12:53 PM

cascades like a w
                          a
                            t
                            e
                            r
                            fall

S Arthur

. . . Hills jump with brooks.
trees tumble out of twigs and sticks;
e e cummings

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