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Songbird
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0 posted 2001-05-29 07:20 PM



Flash of orange in tree
Bird watcher's evening delight
Oriole surprise

Gliding red flashes
Perky top feathered twitches
The Cardinals rule

Chatty loud chatter
Blue flashes from tree to tree
Jay Bird's taunting cat

Mocking bird sings trill
If there's no words to be said
He repeats what's heard

Sparrows gather round
Picnicker's left crumbs on ground
Quick picker uppers

Round capital dome
Pigeons strut their shiny wings
Careful where you sit

Crows call, here's some corn
Farmer's got plenty to spare
Let him know we're here


© Copyright 2001 Marcia Estep - All Rights Reserved
Titia Geertman
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1 posted 2001-05-29 07:23 PM


OOOOOOOOOOOOO WOW I love this one very much.

nice, nice Haiku's, thank you so much

Titia

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Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
2 posted 2001-05-29 08:34 PM


I liked these too...I love to watch birds and you captured their spirit here!  
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3 posted 2001-05-30 07:16 AM


SongBird~

Oh ... just look at these lovely treats ! !

As I sit and watch the Cardinals on the windowsill ...
your words sing to me.

Song of the morning
Feathering softly about
Friends-of-wing chorus


You did a MARVELOUS job with capturing each of these beauties !
Thanking you for this early morning treat.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

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Irish Rose
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4 posted 2001-05-30 08:13 AM


I love birds and I love to feed them, I so enjoyed this one.

Kathleen Blake

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee


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5 posted 2001-05-30 08:34 AM


...Round capital dome
Pigeons strut their shiny wings
Careful where you sit
...

You've spotted several kind of birds. Well done.
Melton

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6 posted 2001-05-30 08:37 AM


wonderful.....wonderful haikus...love them all as I do like to watch them.

Charisma

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7 posted 2001-05-30 10:19 AM


feathering your nest with lovelies...

wonderful!

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8 posted 2001-05-30 10:25 AM


enjoyed!!  great little snapshots with a movie camera...the pigeon one produced a giggle for sure
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