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VAS
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0 posted 2001-05-29 02:01 PM


I feel like I've been gone so long...here's my post Memorial Day poem.


No Longer a Child, Yet
Virginia Salter

as a child
stripes of red and white
waving greeting to this land
brought a lump to my throat
tears to my eyes
forty-eight stars
twinkled a reminder of its members
as a proud people group
would cheer
salute
and stand taller than tall

to live here
meant one was
Judeo-Christian heritage
loving of his neighbor
free to walk the streets
play in the parks
pray in school
enjoy moments of silence
for the losses endured
in common

as a teen
fifty stars twinkled
sprinkled joy to inhabitants
glory to this land
tears in the wake of hearing
voices raised to "Old Glory"
seeking its continued bannered flight

now
past unpopular wars,
hired soldiers,
diversified peoples
with graying values,
fraying patriots,
lying comrades
still a tear ensues
when a sometimes tattered flag
waves over the city
at full
or half mast
yet the lump is not as large
nor the tears as prolific
but the pain in my heart
can be greater still
than ever before

and now,
a woman, in a process of saging,
the focus of my pledge
lands fully upon the faith
in those wonderful words
"One nation, under God,..."
may they remain
as long as humanity has breath
be understood
as long as humanity
has mind, heart, soul
and may unity
in His will
ever be our goal


May 29, 2001

[This message has been edited by VAS (edited 05-29-2001).]

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Mother_Earth
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1 posted 2001-05-29 02:36 PM


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2 posted 2001-05-29 03:11 PM


Beautiful tribute to the past and a real look at the change that has taken place as moral values continue to sag.  Thanks for the well written reminder.
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3 posted 2001-05-29 04:34 PM


and now,
a woman, in a process of saging,
the focus of my pledge
lands fully upon the faith
in those wonderful words
"One nation, under God,..."
may they remain
as long as humanity has breath
be understood
as long as humanity
has mind, heart, soul
and may unity
in His will
ever be our goal


Beautiful written, well said

Charisma

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4 posted 2001-05-29 05:26 PM


Oh, VAS this is so well done.  Joyce
Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 2001-05-30 10:44 AM


Dear VAS, I'm so glad you pointed this out to me. Now I'm embarassed for having missed this. You have captured what many have thought. I have never lost my regard for the flag, having lived overseas in an unjust sytem of government. Thank you for this wonderful and well written piece.
Liz

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6 posted 2001-05-30 06:32 PM


This brought such emotion to me as I read. Thank you for posting this.

Kathleen Blake

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and the sun drips honey."
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7 posted 2001-05-30 06:37 PM


Amen!

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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