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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2001-05-19 10:15 AM

Splendor of You

Your beauty was captured in folds of a rose
Your strength in the tides of the sea
Your love in the night sky of twinkling bliss
In stars looking downward at me

Your breath is the breeze sweeping over the jasmine
Your eyes are the jewels I desire
Your kisses the touch of a butterfly wing
That kindles a hot glowing fire

As petals of tulips fold up in the dark
Your arms hold me into the night
Your spirit’s reflected in sun glimmering waters
And whispering words of delight

Look deep in my eyes at my love pure and true
And see what I see in the splendor of you

Elizabeth Santos

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 05-19-2001).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-05-19 10:23 AM

I do so enjoy reading these delights that I see from your eyes to your pen...

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-05-19 10:28 AM

Your breath is the breeze sweeping over the jasmine
Your eyes are the jewels I desire
Your kisses the touch of a butterfly wing
That kindles a hot glowing fire
=========================

this is beautiful Liz,
how could it not be...
butterflies, roses, stars, and hearts on fire...
all make for most lovely inspire.
kissed in rhyme divine ...very lovely indeed.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-05-19 10:39 AM

so so lovely, you still write some of the most romantic, tender poetry!!!

joycerogers
Member

since 2001-05-16

Posts 83
Texas

4 posted 2001-05-19 10:43 AM

The splendor of this poem makes my heart feel delight.

Quiet Thunder, rumble
Through my cloud.
Touch my secret parts
Where only you are allowed. - Joyce Rogers

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

5 posted 2001-05-19 10:55 AM

So beautiful Liz, brilliant poem!

Nathan

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-05-19 11:08 AM

Oh, SweetLizzie~
Sighhhhhhhh !
You sure can pull the heartstrings with the beauty of your thoughts.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 2001-05-19 01:49 PM

Gorgeous, Elizabeth! Very beautifully written!

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

8 posted 2001-05-19 02:08 PM

Oh I wish you could hear me here (such big ooos and ahhhs), this was perfection!

~*~ I write ~ Therefore I am ~*~
Homepage: http://www.mysteria-poetry.cityslide.com/contents/contents.cfm/451673

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

9 posted 2001-05-19 02:24 PM

Liz,

If I told you how lovely I find this it would probably make you blush. Perhaps I need to stick to painting. Simply wonderful.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

10 posted 2001-05-19 02:55 PM

Absolutely beautiful write, Liz. I always enjoy your writing very much.

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

11 posted 2001-05-19 07:14 PM

Liz, I always enjoy your poetry, and this was just so beautiful! Into my library this goes

Take care,
Melissa~

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

12 posted 2001-05-19 07:29 PM

This makes me glad I am here....poetry like this, thankyou!

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

13 posted 2001-05-19 09:03 PM

You are the light in the darkness.....you're work NEVER fails to impress me Liz. I loved this.

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

14 posted 2001-05-19 09:24 PM

Elizabeth,
You are the love in lovely.
A beautiful sensitive write.
Sy

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

15 posted 2001-05-19 09:41 PM

I'm happy I've choosen your poem to read,
now I can fall asleep with beautifull words in my head. Thank you so much.

Titia

rosepetals25

Member Elite

since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

16 posted 2001-05-20 01:05 AM

Elizabeth,

I know I'm going to say what everyone else said.. but the first thing that popped in my thoughts was "Oh so beautiful". You're amazing.

TaraB

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

17 posted 2001-05-20 01:11 AM

Hi Liz,

This is beautiful, I see your pen is still truly blessed, very much enjoyed,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

18 posted 2001-05-20 08:49 AM

THank you all so very much for the kind responses to this poem.
Liz

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

19 posted 2001-05-21 05:14 AM

Oh Liz, my friend, the splendour of you, indeed!!!

You write exceptionally beautiful poetry...

Regards,
Sudhir

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

20 posted 2001-06-05 08:24 PM

your poems are amazing and make me very happy

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