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AJ Keating
Junior Member

since 2001-05-10

Posts 26
New Hampshire

0 posted 2001-05-26 10:03 PM

Because of your mere existence,
And because of your sweet essence,
Through geophysical transmittance,
My metaphysical existence
Is elevated to a brighter place,
Where enlightenment is within reach.

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"...apathy isn't it...we can do something. Ok, so flower power didn't work, so what? We start again."

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

1 posted 2001-05-26 10:37 PM

This is cool! I enjoyed it!

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

Poet deVine

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

2 posted 2001-05-26 10:38 PM

Can you hear me snapping my fingers?? Enjoyed this!

Tiersdin
Member Elite

since 2000-11-17

Posts 2364
east coast

3 posted 2001-05-26 11:32 PM

Adam, this was outstanding!

loved it!

~Tier{R.T.}

AJ Keating
Junior Member

since 2001-05-10

Posts 26
New Hampshire

4 posted 2001-05-26 11:34 PM

Thanks all for the responses. They give me a new hope for my writing...

Wow it's funny, I've gotten more response on this poem than any other that I've posted here, which have all been sonnets. I wrote this one in five minutes while driving down the road the other day, hehe

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"...apathy isn't it...we can do something. Ok, so flower power didn't work, so what? We start again."

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

5 posted 2001-05-26 11:51 PM

And the beat goes on! Loved this!

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-05-26 11:55 PM

very nice!

brian madden
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 4374
ireland

7 posted 2001-05-27 01:22 PM

wonderful poem enjoyed the read

"you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2001-05-27 04:07 PM

AJ~
Delightfully appealing.
I have a car muse too ...
Listen to them ... they know their stuff !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

9 posted 2001-05-27 04:15 PM

Give us time...sometimes all the sonnet readers don't get to catch them all...

as for this? Two thumbs up!

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

10 posted 2001-05-27 05:11 PM

AJ..this is Greeaaaaat!!! i will go an read your other ones now ok

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