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PoemCrazy Member
since 2000-11-30
Posts 159 |
'Waning Eloquence' again, the sun sets, and dreams go undreamt. volume becomes the chosen norm, as silence goes unrecognized. peace and love forgotten, flash overcomes substance. and everyone dies a little inside. why do you surrender that part of you? we'll show no tears, this is your choice, without a face, you have no voice. where have all the humans gone? |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Fantastic poem . The question is ... Were there any there to begin with or are we all just nothing ? I realy enjoyed this poem, it's very well written, and you make your point well . L.of.L. Tommy . XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
This is very good....all poems should, at one point or another, ask the question... |
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Watersign6 Senior Member
since 2001-05-25
Posts 823Hurricane,WV |
all i can say is its amazing an wonderful PoemCrazy  |
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latin passion Senior Member
since 2001-04-26
Posts 576 |
What a great read. Keep writing. |
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pamela08 Junior Member
since 2001-05-27
Posts 27California,USA |
a very strong poem all i can say is it is amazing...well done |
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