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Michael G
Senior Member

since 2000-06-25

Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2001-05-24 06:00 PM

The lightning follows past
the scar in the ground
before the hundled mass
fearing to be found
The angels in the sky
turn the heads away
crying to a god
whose passion seems to fade.

The lightning comes again
to open up their hearts
seeing once again
that they are all apart
estranged from simple lives
the kind that barely wake
they listen to the sounds
the crying angels make.

Heaven is long away
lost to all of us
its only for the gods to play
leaving us this dust
Heaven is far away
for angels coming home
we've been gone far to long
to remember where to go.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

1 posted 2001-05-24 07:25 PM

Sometimes it can seem that way, where do we go? WOW Michael G~ this is stunning...thanks...

Lauren~

***

Nothing Beautiful In This World
Is Ever Really Lost
All Things Beloved
Live on In Our Hearts...Forever."

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

2 posted 2001-05-24 07:41 PM

Liked it allot.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2001-05-24 07:50 PM

MichaelG~
This is such such wonderful pondering in your phrases ~

'estranged from simple lives
the kind that barely wake
they listen to the sounds
the crying angels make'

I really enjoyed this thought~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Marina
Member Elite

since 2000-02-10

Posts 2245
Pickering, Ontario

4 posted 2001-05-25 11:09 AM

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Heaven is long away
lost to all of us
its only for the gods to play
leaving us this dust
Heaven is far away
for angels coming home
we've been gone far to long
to remember where to go.

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I particarily like this last verse. I like your use of words and vision they place in the mind. But I would have to disagree with you. Very few things are ever lost forever, some just take longer to find again then others.

Marina

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

5 posted 2001-05-25 02:19 PM

Hi Michael,

I am always so happy to read your writing, this is just wonderful, thank you so much for sharing,

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Watersign6
Senior Member

since 2001-05-25

Posts 823
Hurricane,WV

6 posted 2001-05-25 02:24 PM

thank you Michael ive read a few of yours now
an am just thoroughly enjoying your writing
an the way your words flow so well,this poem is stunning an has captivated my mind with
such wonderful expressions.

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