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latin passion
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0 posted 2001-05-24 05:56 PM


A sharp pain--
in my right shoulder.
The signal, of time
ever stopping jolt;
to say the least.
"Rise it's a brand new day."

I don't want to leave
this sweet silent bliss.
More instant this jolt becomes.
"Arise -- a new day awaits!"

Move slowly, for you can
now hear the chattering.
Birds in the forest,
given their validity.

"Arise to your new day--"
Mother Nature patiently awaits.
She has planned much
for you to see.

BEHOLD...
Appreciate all that she gives you.
"Come greet your new day!"

let our hands communicate what's in our heart. A Wisp of a brush...

© Copyright 2001 LP - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2001-05-24 07:45 PM


LatinPassion~
A wonderful awakening, indeed !

"Arise to your new day--"
Mother Nature patiently awaits.
She has planned much
for you to see.

BEHOLD...
Appreciate all that she gives you.
"Come greet your new day!"


~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
                               noles1@totcon.com             

walker
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2 posted 2001-05-24 07:51 PM


Beautiful!
Watersign6
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3 posted 2001-06-05 07:57 AM


enjoyed this so much  
latin passion
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4 posted 2001-06-05 09:39 PM


~~Marge~~
Ahh... I am honored by you stopping by for the read.  It was an awakening! Thank you for your kind comments.

~~Walker~~ Thank you -
thank you for the reading.
~~Watersign6~~Glad you did!  Thanks for the read.

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