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VI
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0 posted 2001-07-07 08:36 AM


I dreamed that your voice sent me into seclusion
As if a school of birds I drift free
I dreamed that I was consumed by your passion
It sent chills like a winter wind
I dreamed of a hiding place
I found serenity in your eyes
I dreamed of a candle atop my windowsill
Just past it was an image of you
I dreamed of the spring
I dreamed of the heavens
I dreamed of of life without you
I was awaken

VI
Author Stephen Ingram


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1 posted 2001-07-07 05:37 PM


well, now that this is back. . . let me be among those to welcome you to Passions. . . this is an excellent poem, full of the desires of the heart. . .

well done. . . hope to see more of your work. . .

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2 posted 2001-07-07 05:45 PM


Welcome to Passions Stephen!  This is a beautiful first post, I hope to read more of your dreams ...  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Logan
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3 posted 2001-07-07 05:45 PM


Welcome to Passions, with a very nice read to start you off. Look to see you often. I know you will feel welcomed, as everyone made me feel. Well done. gentle smile
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4 posted 2001-07-07 06:31 PM


Welcome to Passions! Please be sure to check your e-mail for a special message!

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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5 posted 2001-07-07 11:11 PM


oman awesome ending to a great poem. Welcome to Passions!
MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
6 posted 2001-07-07 11:26 PM




First, Welcome to Passions.......

You have such a lovely piece here.....and many heartfelt lines......

Thank you for sharing it....
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It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

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