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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~~~Within~~~ Within you I found the strength to be Something better Than the simple me Within the locked doors of my heart I found myself Forever bound from the start Within the whispers That yet to come I found the yearning And the terrified drums Within the bitterness of my tears I found my horrifying fears And within every vision I saw I deeply wished That there is someone Who could truly know Someone who could take away The old cursed whispers That locked my way Someone who could teach me To see The scattered pieces of this mystery ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Thank you It's only me.......only me |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
A lovely expression of opening one's self up to the love of another. Corinne |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I hope, my friend, that the person that you speak of helped you to find not only these words, but all of the wonderful, spiritual words that you have shared with us. . . for we truly owe them a debt of thanks. . . superbly written. . . you always amaze me with your depth. . . wonderful. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I have a wonderful friend who did these things for me too. It's great isn't it? To feel alive again? All writing comes |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Great write...wonderful flow and rhyme...I truly enjoyed it! sp  it was love that first drew me, |
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Ann Member
since 2000-07-07
Posts 64Australia |
this was a lovely poem...i agree, it had such a nice flow... i hope you found that someone who can help you find what you need best wishes, ~ANN~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful easy flowing writing...I really enjoyed the insight and wisdom! |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
so very nicely said... nicely done indeed... I enjoyed this a great deal |
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MyEnchanted_Melody Senior Member
since 2001-05-30
Posts 1106across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be. |
~Corinne~ Thank you for your nice comment. ~Sven~ As always thank you my friend........& I hope that too.......  ~Lone Wolf~ certainly it is great.......but I haven't been there yet..... ~Snowpants~ Thank you for enjoying it...... ~Ann~ Thank you Ann......and I hope that too...... ~ethome~ I'm glad that you enjoyed it and thank you for the nice comment. ~Cpat hair~ Thank you dearly for enjoying it.....and saying it nicely..... *********************************** It's only me.......only me |
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