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Seduction Seeks She (Alliteration)
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Seduction Seeks She (Alliteration) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Seduction Seeks She (Alliteration) She smiles seductively Sensuously she shimmers Slipping sinuously She seeks sin He hunts hungrily Hearing her heart He hears hope She sighs softly He hears Sinking slowly she succumbs He hastens her heart Heat heaps heat Spiraling she shoots starward Shedding streaming sparks Sharing starlight she shines He hears her heartbeat She smiles Heavenly he Sighs softly Simple seductution Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
WOW!!!! Marsha! I love this!! You're gonna have to tell me how to do this! I just love it!  SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
oh now I like this love. . . so very well done. . . and it reads wonderfully. . . thank you for sharing. . . -------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Perfectly penned she sighs softly LOL I give sister ...this is fantastic |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"Spiraling she shoots starward" Enjoyed this. Well done! PM |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
Look at Puck, stretching wings.... Brava! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
and she enjoyed every minute of it???? Kathleen Blake |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarshaLove~ This is marvelously penned ! I adore the muse of your keep ~ Love you, sweet poetess ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Hope Rises New Member
since 2001-05-26
Posts 6In the land of Dreams second cloud on the right |
A bit of fluff, but worth a smile |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Wonderful Marsha! Beautiful sentiments wrapped up in twirling alliteration, I really enjoyed this, well done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
prefectly penned poetry. "you are what you own in this land, you can be king and it all depends on the view and what you can see" Whipping boy |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I "see" you!!!!! Wow....so pretty!! Ya! I finally see Mushy!!!!  |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Such sweet simplicity Wonderfull written words Titia |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sigh |
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