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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
may I shadow your days in quiet, loving ways in calm, cool desire, may I light your fire? may I be the one who sees you bend down to your knees to wrap your arms round treasures such as have not been measured... ~*~ may I lift you up again pull you close into your when then see your need sent godspeed as you drown in giving greed may I shadow all your days in quiet, loving, caring ways in calm, cool, complete desire, may I slowly light your fire? |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oooh now I really like this, it's a keeper  Take care, Melissa~ |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
nicely done... I enjoyed |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Ssssssssssssteeeeaaaammmyyy! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Oh my goodness, your poem just took hold of me and swirled me around in a pool of emotions that didn't seem 2want2stop... Awesome writing! I really really really enjoyed this... ThankUpoetFriend for this treat of a read *~coco~* |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Oh yes!!! This was wonderful. All writing comes |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful, comforting words...very nicely done. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
me thinks you already did  (light the fire)so nice and slowly sensual Deca... well done seduction *L* We're all feeding our lonely like it might go away, |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
tenderly succulent such lovely devotion is a rarity, is it not? |
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