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Lonely Shadow
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since 2000-03-14
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0 posted 2001-05-24 02:19 AM


Can love reach to the ends of the earth?
Can the love survive this vast distance?
Is it possible for two lovers to be together
even though they are a world apart?
I believe that it is possible
Because the woman whom I adore
the beautiful angel who plucked the sorrow
from my beating heart and gave it new life
She is beyond my sight and reach
But, I can feel her loving presence
I can sense her gentle smile when she is happy
Oh my love, when can we be together
When can I touch your sweet lips with mine?
To share the bounties of our love?
Soon, I know it will be soon
Then the happiness I've longed for
Willl finally fill my loving heart
and surround me, for as long as I draw breath
I will always love you

Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

© Copyright 2001 Lonely Shadow - All Rights Reserved
angelswing
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since 2000-02-10
Posts 705
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1 posted 2001-05-24 04:52 AM


Another fantastic poem Lonely Shadow . It is also a very sad one, but in other ways it is realy happy . I am glad that you have a love that great . I enjoyed reading it .
Thanks, L.of.L. Tommy .
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Sunshine
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2 posted 2001-05-24 08:35 AM


This has "hope" strewn all throughout....chances are, it will happen....

belief has a large part in what happens to one's life....

I enjoyed!


Ann
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since 2000-07-07
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3 posted 2001-05-24 08:43 AM


great poem Shadow....it shows a capacity to love that many people would probably not think possible. all the best  
vandana
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4 posted 2001-05-24 11:03 AM


enjoy
Sven
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5 posted 2001-05-27 09:49 PM


love transcends all. . . you're learning this. . . that's the first lesson. . .

great poem. . . I love the way that you showed the longing here. . . not too much. . . just enough. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Watersign6
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6 posted 2001-05-28 05:10 PM


oh so wonderful,you are so talented  
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