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My Shining Star.....For Kirk and Vicky
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My Shining Star.....For Kirk and Vicky |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az 
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STAR LIGHT, STAR BRIGHT What will I see tonight? Is it the moon, is it the stars Or is it the city lights? FIRST STAR I SEE TONIGHT Where is it? Where'd it go? I can't see it With the city light glow! I WISH I MAY Be somewhere to see That beautiful star How I wish I could be Right where you are I WISH I MIGHT Be able to find it It's so hard to see! I need to be somewhere Like up in the trees? GET THE WISH I WISH TONIGHT Oh why can't I find it? These lights are too bright! I want to see that beautiful star I want to see it tonight! But, If we look in our hearts dear friends I know that you will see That bright and shining star is you At least you are to me! Also dedicated to my two beautiful little girls! Cpalmer God is our inspiration [This message has been edited by cpalmer (edited 07-02-2001).] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
What a clever, heartfelt tribute  Take care, Melissa~ |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Thank you! Not bad for 4am? lol Cindi God is our inspiration |
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D'nal New Member
since 2001-07-02
Posts 7 |
a beautiful rewrite, worhty of great praise. i tipmy hat to you for such a great poem and with such feeling, and a new appeal thank you for sharing it with us. ku |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Thank you so much D'nal, I appreciate your imput! Im glad you liked it! Cindi God is our inspiration |
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Kirksters Junior Member
since 2001-07-01
Posts 47 |
Thanks for the poem. I love it. You know the feeling is mutual. I know I've told you before but you really have a way of makeing others feel so good. Love ya.... |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cindi~ Lovingly done ... but of course ! 'But, If we look in our hearts dear friends I know that you will see That bright and shining star is you At least you are to me!' Oh, to have our hearts lit by the glow from the star of a friend .... is just heavenly. Nicely done, poet. I'm sooooooooo glad you're here !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
How cute!!  All writing comes |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Marge! Thanks so much! everyone needs a bright shining star in their life! Im finding that being here is making my heart warm and fuzzy! Thanks again! Cindi Lone wolf Im glad you like it! Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
cindi- this one makes me smile big...  you brighten my life as well, my dear.. i'm so happy to have you for a friend.. have i mentioned how happy i am that you've started writing again...and that you've joined our little family of friends here at passions? Well, i am!!!  love and big hugs, ~vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 07-02-2001).] |
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cpalmer Senior Member
since 2001-06-26
Posts 977Phoenix, Az |
Vicky All I can say is "I love you!" Cindi God is our inspiration; Words of the heart can be music to our ears |
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