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Rick
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0 posted 2001-07-01 07:12 AM


I sit here with my many words, to share with you my friends
And hope you journey with me well, until that journey ends
Come share with me these moments; come see as with my eyes
Come share in my reflections which fade with slow goodbyes

© Copyright 2001 Rick Van Weenen - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2001-07-01 08:09 AM


share your many words, then, please
allow us to visit your world with ease
to see great sights as you see them
as you come to write, again, and again...

so poignant, this! Well done!

Aimster
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2 posted 2001-07-01 09:39 AM


Rick

this was just great! loved how
in such few words you displayed
such a powerful meaning...you truly
have a talent. take care and i look
forward to reading more of your work.

take care.
amy  

"but i see your true colors,
shining through...
i see your true colors
and that's why i love you"
~phil collins~

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3 posted 2001-07-01 10:48 AM


Rick,

Sharing here is like living anew
Finding new friends before you are through.

Sandra

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4 posted 2001-07-01 12:40 PM


it's a fabulous forum for sharing, thank you for this.


MyEnchanted_Melody
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across the land of dreams. In your heart, I'd always be.
5 posted 2001-07-01 05:01 PM




Yes....share with us words you weave
music you play

and we will happily listen....

Thank you
**************************

It's only me.......only me
I hope that would suffice eternally

{{to cross a sea of wonder, and hold close at heart all dreams}}

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2001-07-01 05:31 PM


Rick,
Once again excellent.

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7 posted 2001-07-01 05:40 PM


Rick:  Very nice invitation!  I'm sure you'll find many followers.

Betty Lou Hebert

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8 posted 2001-07-01 05:53 PM


Lovely verse, Rick.  Looking forward to more.  

All writing comes
by the grace of God.
-Ralph Waldo Emerson

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9 posted 2001-07-01 06:33 PM


Rick what a wonderful invitation.  Thank you for the beautiful words.  *s*

On the wings of words our spirits fly....and our souls are free.
~Me~

Rick
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10 posted 2001-07-02 06:15 AM


Thank you all for your words, I will share many more words with you all and look forward to reading yours.

Be well

Rick

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