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Suetang
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0 posted 2001-06-28 10:41 PM


You are the mist that lies low over the valley
Your presence moves with the wind through the trees
You're the gull that glides over the ocean
Your love is so welcome like a warm Summer's breeze

You are the first Spring flower in the meadow
After the cold of the Winter is no more
You are the falling Autumn leaves
That land softly on the grassy floor

You are the embers that burn brightly in the fire
And the reason I keep coming back for more
You are the chain of gold around my neck
And the key to my heart's door

So many images of you are all around me
In nature you take on many a disguise
So may beautiful qualities I see
Whenever I gaze deeply into your eyes

Suetang

© Copyright 2001 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
RSWells
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1 posted 2001-06-28 11:53 PM


Ah the sounds and sights of Love. Lucky you.

"Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve"

ethome
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2 posted 2001-06-28 11:57 PM


Beautiful lines full of  precious metaphors of love!
ThUnDeRkYsS
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3 posted 2001-06-29 12:10 PM


Truly a wonderful expression of your Love... Liked this lots  

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Suetang
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4 posted 2001-06-29 12:45 PM


Thank you all......I'm glad you enjoyed this.
Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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5 posted 2001-06-29 03:10 AM


SueTang~
What a lovely look at your heart.
~*Marge*~

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6 posted 2001-06-29 08:43 AM


yep... sounds like love to me...

nicely done !!!

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7 posted 2001-06-29 04:35 PM


Suetang, this is very lovely!
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8 posted 2001-06-29 04:40 PM


yep... even sound prettier this time I read it...

you have a way with images... one I enjoy

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9 posted 2001-06-29 06:39 PM


Sue:  This is lovely!  Has a beautiful atsmosphere to it.

Betty Lou Hebert

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