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Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

0 posted 2001-06-25 11:00 AM

Blush of Love

If love can make a heartbeat flush
The glowing cheeks in rosy blush
Then it is this, my radiant face
A mirror of love’s deep embrace

For love brings heat and trembling chills
A breathless sigh, a cringe of thrills
A heart that skips a beat or two
Each time that I remember you

Although we parted long ago
A burst of heat, a subtle glow
Quite unexpectedly appears
When thoughts of you dissolve the years

Some day when all is said and done
And skies are filled with scarlet sun
I’ll spend the twilight of my days
Imbued in red of glowing rays

And in the blush of sunset’s cast
I will confess my love at last

Elizabeth Santos

Sudhir Iyer
Member Ascendant

since 2000-04-26

Posts 6943
Mumbai, India : now in Belgium

1 posted 2001-06-25 11:24 AM

A classic from your pen, Liz...

Regards,
Sudhir

"I was born intelligent - education ruined me"

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

2 posted 2001-06-25 11:25 AM

Elizabeth, I know the feeling. When those thoughts creep in and the warmth flows through our veins, it makes the memories all the more dear. Beautiful words, ME

illusion
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 296

3 posted 2001-06-25 11:30 AM

Fates may dictate that paths be parted, but the heart never forgets.

This is very beautiful!

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

4 posted 2001-06-25 11:33 AM

steady rhythmic flow

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

5 posted 2001-06-25 01:25 PM

How beautiful and how very true this is, for it is these tender blushes that keep me warm most of the time! Loved it!

"Lose your temper and you lose a friend; lie and you lose yourself."
~ Hopi ~

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

6 posted 2001-06-25 01:35 PM

Maybe she could have confessed her love mor quickly?
Well done. Even flow = enjoyable read

Fancy
Member

since 2001-06-05

Posts 189
TN/USA

7 posted 2001-06-27 03:34 AM

...lovely done...but, never, never, never, never wait 'til last to confess your love...

"...don't ever stop loving, don't ever stop believing, don't ever stop dreaming your dreams..."
Warmly...
Fancy

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

8 posted 2001-06-27 07:22 AM

Love the title Elizabeth!  The verses that follow sure bring out the theme set up by the title!   Like this one....

                                 "Although we parted long ago
                                  A burst of heat, a subtle glow
                                   Quite unexpectedly appears
                              When thoughts of you dissolve the years"

That's so realistically beautiful!   Well written Elizabeth!

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

9 posted 2001-06-27 07:33 AM

Wonderful cadence and rhyme Liz ... such a beautiful flow throughout your words to compliment these lovely romantic remembrances. Very nicely written!

Best wishes and hugs,
/Kit

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

10 posted 2001-08-01 01:30 PM

Gosh, Liz, this is just so lovely, it flows like a ballad~

Melissa~

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