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Open Poetry #14

Inside The Woman

redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

0 posted 2001-06-23 11:30 PM

Inside the woman lives the girl
she's hiding most of the time
behind the worries and her fears
weighing on her mind

The face she shows the outside world
Is so little like herself
Til someone looks deep inside
and she remembers how it felt

Her laugh breaks loose, the smile unleashed
and suddenly she returns
his love awakened the sweet truth
inside the woman, lives the girl

Logan
Senior Member

since 2001-05-28

Posts 1641
Arkansas

1 posted 2001-06-24 12:08 PM

Hopefully no one forgets the boy or girl inside of ourselves...nice bringing to the foreground of ourselves..gentle smile

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

2 posted 2001-06-24 12:09 PM

How true! There's a part of every woman that never ages, though most of us keep that fact well hidden.

Betty Lou Hebert

redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

3 posted 2001-06-24 04:50 PM

I'm 17 and don't you forget it!! hahaha

Titia Geertman
Member Ascendant

since 2001-05-07

Posts 5182
Netherlands

4 posted 2001-06-27 06:09 PM

It's important to keep the child in you alive (even if you're seventeen), people often forget and grow old too fast.

Thanks for this lovely poem.

Titia

A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess...
Feel free to use the pictures on my website. http://communities.msn.com/Titiasplace&naventryid=100

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-06-27 06:43 PM

I like this one. . . I'm still a child sometimes. . .

well done. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-06-27 08:31 PM

I wonder why you seem to write my own thoughts so clearly! wow., this speaks so much.

redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

7 posted 2001-06-27 08:33 PM

I don't know Irish Rose, but you always have something sweet to say to my writing, and I thank you for that.

WE must be kindred spirits (smile)

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